| 11 Aug 2004 | Jasper | Yay, it's Ryoko! Overall this is a pretty good pic. The anatomy looks fine, and your use of colour is great. I especially like the contrast of her hair because it adds a lot of depth. However I think you should spend some time drawing hands. If you look at hands, you can see that each finger has 3 joints (including the joint connecting the finger to the hand). Her hand to the right looks a bit awkward. Try wrapping your hand around an object and study how it looks. Also, the outline looks a bit...jagged--as if you were shaking while you were drawing this. Try to relax your hand a bit more, and make sure you have enough arm space to make long, clean strokes. Anyways, good luck and keep up the great work. | |
| 5 Jan 2005 | Kim Kimaera Wyatt | Very good. Ryoko is always a fun character to draw. You did a nice job here. Great colouring as well. ~_^ | |
| 8 Aug 2005 | Ryoko-chan | this is a pretty good drawing the coloring is awesome(as in way better then what i could ever do) hands are hard though you drew them good cept they're a little small, sides that the only other thin i really noticed was that she needs to be thinner. Good job | |