hey! *first comment dance*

Ok. First of all your drawings are pretty cute. But i have a few pointers.

1.I can tell you are trying to draw realism because of your noses and eyes. When you are colouring realism, try not to make lines around the face and stuff, then just colouring in the skin. Real people dont have lines. Try shading.

2.Make the nose and eyes closer together, always draw the face first before you draw in the head.

3. Dont make 2 big lines going down from the eyes/eyebrows to the nose SO bold. Try making them with shading.

hope i helped, and i think you will be a great artist.

Gabriella Grace Christensen replies: "Thank-you. One, everthing so far in my fan quarter, I havn't been trying for realisim. With the anime.. it's anime, and with the hp, I was attempting to find my own stylistic way to do it. I was not atempting to make it look realistic. Thank you for the advise though. I'll considder it next time when I drawing real life."