| 14 Aug 2004 |  Margot Bongers | Very pretty, I just love those dresses!! | |
| 14 Aug 2004 |  Tracey Parker | The hands need work. Before I read the description, though, I immediately thought, "that's Narcissa Malfoy." So, you've definitely captured my idea of her as a character. Good job on the other lady's face, too, and the dresses. | |
| 15 Aug 2004 | Justtrip | The hair is awesome, especially for the reka! The necks both look a bit long, though. | |
| 17 Aug 2004 |  Leigh 'Katt' Berggren | Your detail is wonderful, and the positioning of the characters is very good. However, you've got some proportion problems. Either their bodies are too small and lean, or their heads are too big. The hands especially are too small. They could also do with a widening of the shoulders and ribcage.
Sorry to tear ya apart there, because you definitely have talent and an eye for detail. Once you get anatomy nailed down you'll be a very good artist. =) | |
| 17 Aug 2004 | Sarah Riddle | Very well done. This is one of the best pieces that I've seen so far. The only thing that I think could use a bit of work is the necks, they're just a tad bit too long. Other than that, it looks absolutely perfect. | |
| 18 Mar 2008 | Percy weasley : a tad of tea. | woopee ! BANG dead Narcissa! you can see the girl is dying to do this... it’s explained in the clenched fists... wicked drawing | |
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