i see how you messed up on this picture......
i know how hard it is to draw the eyes, and that's where you messed up.....
you should've made the eyes more slanted...
but the biggest mistake you did was the pupil + the iris.
(the black part + the color part of the eye)
you should've...uh, its hard to explain, but you should've drawn the eyes looking at you.
then you should've drawn half of of the iris + pupil.....
the only reason you should draw the iris + pupil fully is if you want him to show shock or surprise....
well, uh, i tried to make that as clear as possible.....
it's hard to explain.....
nice try though!!!!!!
i luv 17!!!!!
