|3 Jan 2012|| Alex leroy caswell|
Lol, this is great! Humurous, and a good rhyming scheme.
|26 May 2012|| Alaska Rose Scarlacova|
Awesome. Literally, I wish I was a good poem writer.
|25 Oct 2012|| Lily Firiel Archer|
Mm. I like this.
Comical incidents of mismanaged magic... but then I’m forced back to the heart of the matter. This is no buffoon, but a great man, aging and fading and lonely.
And even Arthur has left him. Surely, if not for spells, the king could visit his old friend and mentor to give him company?
|7 Mar 2013|| Mark Isaac Hansberger|
Ahhh! A fine poem indeed! Thanks for sharing!
|14 Apr 2013|| Millen Quinn Alley|
This cheered me up! It’s perfect!
|12 Aug 2013|| Val Hannon|
It’s both cute and touching! I hope you’ll expand it into a story someday.
|13 Sep 2013|| Patrick MushroomOnStilts McCabe|
Excellent poetry, very funny and tragic too. Has a brilliant flow to it, which makes it easy to read and is exactly the right length. Look forward to reading more of your work