| 15 Mar 2008 |  Jacob Bowdin | One possible correction, the fifth line, ’the’ is probally supposed to be ’that’.
Otherwise, not a bad poem, I like how it turns around at the end, I first had an image of a happily dancing dragon, then got one of your typical red glaring monster that eats humans. The very last line seems catchy for some reason, good wording, ’your life lost in the skies’. | |
| 27 Mar 2008 |  Désirée Ruth Dippenaar | Great poem! I like the way you show the two faces of the dragon: beatiful and majestic, but also dangerous! I like the imagery too, of the sky and the fire... well written, I liked it very much~ ^^ | |
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