|27 Jun 2000|| Iris Lise|
I really enjoyed reading this! It has a lot of good elements that keeps me wanting to read. Good work! =)
|3 Jul 2000|| Madeline Jane Quirk|
might not be that great? it was definately great. no imagination needed either, you put it into words very well. Blenia's sister though, seems a bit undefined... at first I thought she was much younger but she seemed very strong and persistant later. Maybe just some slight mention of her in the room with Blenia at the beginning?
|11 Jan 2001|| James H. McNeil|
Impressive... Very, very, very, very, very impressive... I'm impressed you know? Yes. Not that great indeed! Keep it up and I'm sure you'll do great.
|22 Sep 2002|| Anna "Banana" Campbell|
Hey, that's great! I can't believe that I never got to read it before! You HAVE to write more, and post it too.
|26 Dec 2002|| Cassidy K. Bishop|
ooh. very very good. I like it a lot.
|3 Jul 2004|| Shantari|
HEy that was a very well written story, but i have a question for you and i really really hope you email me at email@example.com My sister's name is Blenia and untill i read this i thought that her name was made up. My dad said he made that name up. So id like to know if you made the name up of if you just happened to hear it somewhere. Thank you for your time and good luck with your writing. Heh, perhaps you can use my real name one time, Antuan.
|2 Feb 2005|| Nancy |
Christina, this is an awesome piece. I truely loved it. Keep writing. I believe you'll get somewhere with your writing some day. I hope to go to a book store and pick up something by you someday, well. ttyl