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SciFi and Fantasy Stories: Full Moon - Parts 3&4

Conclusion of my story: Full Moon...

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"Full Moon" - Parts 3&4



Part III


"Aidan?" her voice shook, barely above a whisper. She waited a few seconds, but there was no answer. Voices, millions of insane voices began to fill her head. They were taunting her, laughing at her. Foolish girl! they said look at what you've done. They laughed cruelly at her as she fell to the floor, holding her hands over her head to block out the sound. Pulling her hands down, she yelled with all of her strength, "Why are you doing this to me !?!"

"Why did you pull away from me? I was never going to harm you!" She looked up, bewildered, and very surprised as his voice filled her ears once again. "What are you so afraid of, Elly? What does your life have to offer you, that forces you to shut out all possibility of finding something more?"

She looked down at the floor, at her old nightgown, and turned her head to look at her house. Memories flooded her; memories of when she was a little girl and how she always use to wish for a way to escape her life. She saw memories of her drunken father - coming in the house late at night, only to hit her mother and make her cry; memories of the countless men who abused her - emotionally, physically, in every way imaginable; and a wave of realization washed over her. "Nothing... I have nothing here..." She looked away from her house and shut out the painful memories as a single tear began to travel down her cheek. "Don't leave me here... I don't think I can take it anymore."

"I won't give up on you, Elly. But you've made it so much more difficult. I need you to close your eyes again. This time, do not pull away and do not look until I say it's all right. No matter what happens, you must trust that I will lead you." She thought for a moment. Was this really what she wanted? How could she know if he was telling her the truth? She paused, no, if I don't go with him know, I'll probably never get a second chance..., "I'll do it..." she replied quickly, not allowing herself even a moment of indecision. "Good, now close your eyes." Her eyelids fluttered a moment, fear and anxiety causing her to hesitate, finally - she closed them.

A familiar breeze swept up around her, as she once again felt him materialize beside her. She felt him grab her hand firmly and sensed the electricity flowing between them. Slowly and carefully he began pulling her towards the edge of the porch. One step, turned into three, and three into nine, and soon they were standing on the cool, dew drenched grass. Her bare feet were sensitive to every rut and rock as they walked; she knew this path, she had walked it a million times over. He continued to lead her towards the woods and the light from the moon darkened as the trees began to enclose the narrow path. She never walked in the woods at night; they frightened her. Still, she kept her pace steady with his, knowing that this was the only way for her to escape.

They walked in silence for what seemed like years. She knew that they had to be deep in the woods by now; she could feel the moonlight pouring over her uncovered skin and the chill of the air in her bones. Shadows crawled over her closed eyelids and a small tremor shook her body. Sensing her distress, Aidan spoke softly "Don't worry so, we're almost there...just a little further now." For some reason, his words calmed her, and she began to forget her anxiety. Finally, they stopped. She felt a soft covering of moss beneath her feet and could hear the sound of water trickling gently nearby as a light breeze ruffled her hair. The air was buzzing and almost seemed to be humming with magick.

"You can open your eyes now, Elly." She was almost afraid to, for he was no longer holding her hand and she couldn't feel him next to her. Looking around slowly, she gasped audibly at what lay before her. The moss, the brook, and the moonlight was all there like she had thought, but what amazed her was what stood tall right before her eyes, apparently floating upright in the air. It was a large, silver-framed mirror that sparkled in the moonlight. The frame was an intricate design covered with delicate shapes that looked like fairies dancing and all sorts of Celtic symbols and shapes that looked centuries old. But what caught her eye most, was what she saw inside the mirror. Instead of seeing herself standing there beside the brook, she saw a tall, handsome man, who looked as though he commanded respect and power. Immediately she knew who it was. The wispy tendrils of hair told her all she needed. The man that stood in her place, in the mirror, was Aidan, King of the Fae.


Part IV


"Aidan?" she asked cautiously, "what's going on?" He looked at her with a serious expression across his face, a stark contrast to his sparkling eyes. "Elly, please...you wouldn't understand, just believe what you see. Do you remember when I told you that you were one person?" He waited as she slowly nodded her head "That's what this mirror is showing you, just as you are a part of me, I am a part of you." Slowly, a vague understanding began to form in her mind. "How can I reach you...?"

"That's the difficult part. You have to leave it all behind. There's no time for you to be afraid, to worry about who and what you're leaving. You have to stop hanging on to your world and let go for once." She took a step back as tears began to clog her throat. Looking up at the mirror, into Aidan's dark eyes, she had to fight to maintain control of her voice. "I don't think I can do that..." He too backed away as she spoke, an emotionless mask covering his face, "...then it's hopeless, this is the only way you can ever be free from your nightmares." They stood there in silence for what seemed like an eternity, looking at each other silently, when suddenly Elly spoke up. "How..." she asked quietly "how do I let go."

"There's only one way. Ignore your fears; let go of your hold on this life, and step through the mirror." Her head shot up as he spoke his last words. Her eyes were wide with disbelief and fear. She desperately tried to calm the voices in her head warning her to turn away before it was too late. She watched as he extended his hand in her direction and beckoned her to come to him. A fierce wind started up all around her and the air became icy cold as if it were trying to push her away. Hugging her arms closer to her chest, she focused her vision on the mirror's surface. Step by excruciating step she made her way towards it.

Soon she stood only inches from its glassy surface. In her frightened haze, she hardly noticed the light snow that had begun to fall around her. His hand was still stretched out to her and his fingertips were only millimeters away from her own. "Elly...don't give up now..." he begged her, as she closed her eyes to drown out the fear that was consuming her. "Reach out and take my hand, you're so close." She opened her eyes again and drew in a deep breath. Touching her fingers lightly to the mirror, she pushed them slowly through the liquid glass. First her fingers, then her arm and finally, closing her eyes, she stepped the rest of the way through the glass. He reached out, and pulled her to him as tears began to stream down her face. Hiding her face in his chest, crying away years of pain and unhappiness, she didn't notice as the snow flew in a fury around them and the mirror vanished.

When the snow and silver finally settled to the ground, two white doves - wings tipped with silver and eyes flashing, emerged and flew in a spiral towards the moonlit sky. Before fading from view, a bright glow began to surround their bodies and they disappeared in a blinding flash of light.
 
 

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DateNameComment 
24 Mar 199945 The Writer
Sorry if I disappoint you, but this is all there is, you've come to the end 2 I'm glad you liked it though 2 And I deeply appreciate the comment!
3 Jun 199945 David
This is a sweet, gentle story into which you have woven great descriptions of setting and emotion. Well done!
22 Oct 1999:-) Karen L. Crumley
BEAUTIFUL, BEATIFUL, BEAUTIFUL! An absolutely breathtaking tale, and I ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT!!
21 Dec 199945 Hila
Very good, well written... I love it although i didn't understand the end
6 Sep 200145 Katie
AUGH! come on! you gotta finish it! you've totally left me hanging. I guess if thats the way you want it I will just have to make up the rest myself ( though I really wanted you to do it cause your really good!)
6 Sep 200145 Mattias
The story was truly great,you are absolutely one of the best of making descriptions of scenary and emoions, I could see and feel everything.
Have you written anything else? If so, I must read it too....
12 Sep 2001:-) Amanda Nikese
aw c'mon! you gotta add more to this story! Please? pretty please? Although if this is the way you want it to end it's still a pretty good ending. ^_^
16 Apr 200245 Laowai
Sorry for all of the bad spelling. Were writing too fast =)
16 Apr 200245 Laowai
This story is absolutely great. I can`t uderstand why people want you to write more. The ending is grat ad it is. They both are turned in to white doves and live happily ever after =)
21 Apr 200345 Lauren Rene Cozart
I love that story. Please write more stories because this one is so beautiful. I loved the end.
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