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SciFi and Fantasy Stories: Angel Slayer (Poem)

A poem - thing dedicated to a friend of mine. It's about a child who sees beyond the mind, and a 'vision' she has when a boy touches her hand.

Main Category: [Mystic]

Sub-categories: [Other Mythical Creatures & Assorted Monsters] [/Magic] [Romance, Emotion]


	You touched my hand And I saw a black dragon Crying out over the storm He is lost Afraid Vulnerable He’s forgotten what’s worth fighting for Set adrift in harsh reality To be met by the red tide Swelling from the earth itself It soothes the beast Holds him tight Rocks him to sleep And leaves him with a dream Of clear skies and a fair maid Who tells him lies Of the friends he turned from The pain she brought The wounds he has And the love to come The rebinding of this shattered heart And these broken wings

Date	Name	Comment
11 Feb 2004	Trish Bunny Saw	Loading... There is a deep, pulsing rhythm in your poem and a careful, dark imagery I really admire. Good poem! first comment polka Brittany Cali replies: "Thank you! This is one of the things I had to play with for a while before I got it right ^^"
19 Jun 2004	Claire BlackSummer Hassell	Loading... Even though this does rhyme often, (I only saw one rhyme, sorry if there were more) its seems like it does rhyme, the words fit each other like a igsaw puzzle, I like how you put it toether! Brittany Cali replies: "Thank you! I really don't try to rhyme that often...it just happens ^^"

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'Angel Slayer (Poem)'

SciFi and Fantasy Stories: Angel Slayer (Poem)