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SciFi and Fantasy Stories: Succubus (Poem)

Short poem about a succubus. Or...succubi in general pretty much.

    Main Category: [Horror]
    Sub-categories: [Dark, Gothic] [Demons, Imps, Devils, Beholders...] [Ghosts, Ghouls, Apparitions] [Other Mythical Creatures & Assorted Monsters]

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Darkness lies
Beneath the skin
Clawed away
Where you begin

With blood so red
It shames the roses
And soul so black
I fear to show it

For death lies
In the slightest touch
The meerest kiss

Hand to hand
Lip to lip
My disease is spread
Like a virus
Through your skin
In your veins

And within your soul
I'll breed again
 
 

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10 Feb 2004:-)
Good, deep, or may I say, inspiring, although it's a bit dark. It's pleasant 4 me to read such things like your poems. No use on commenting on the others, but they are all really great. Well, I think you have talent, although, as I see, no one has posted here any comment. Lack of patience to read. unfortunately, a great part of the world aside us has gained aversion of reading. I hope you continue doing good things, as the ones I have read.

17 Brittany Cali replies: "Heh, alot of my stuff has a bit of a dark taint to it. And I agree that alot of the world has stopped reading. It makes me sad at times. But it's good that some people like you still do ^^
Thanks for stopping by and taking the time to comment ^^"
23 Mar 2004:-) Natalya 'Thanatos' Bree
Ah Succubi. Succubuses? That sounds odd... buses... who knows! Anyway, this is teriffic, you certainly captured their essence.

:-) Brittany Cali replies: "Well, I thought since the plural of incubus is incubi the same must apply to succubus, ne? And buses just sounded odd ^^"
5 Oct 200745 Anonymous
It is succubi.

Dark.
Evil.
Possibly painful.
Hint of death.
Mention of soul.

I like it.
No i'm not depressed, or gothic, or emo (nothing wrong with being gothic or emo, though). I just like evil/dark/gothic things.

can i please copy to my bebo blog?
you'll get credit, a link to your site....

:-) Brittany Cali replies: "Thank you. And again, as long as I get credit, go for it."
12 Jun 200845 Scott Martin
Hi, this is the only way I can contact you since your personal email is not listed. I am a musician / song writer from vancouver bc canada. I am interested in one of your works to turn into a song. This is a serious permission request. Please contact me scott martin at scttblckkn@aol.com for further detail & info... a.s.a.p Thank you... Scott Martin
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