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'The Deciever (Introduction)'


 
 

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SciFi and Fantasy Stories: The Deciever (Introduction)

This I am still writing. I will put the chapters up as they come. It seems to be interesting to my friends, hope it is to you too.

    Main Category: [High Fantasy]
    Sub-categories: [Royalty, Kings, Princes, Princesses, etc] [Warfare, Battles]

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“Faithful follower? That one is not. He would kill the King if that meant getting his gold.” A man in stark yellow trousers, and a loose green top was pacing around the room. His apparent companions stood close by, listening.

“Then who shall go? Our Ladyship needs some protection… God forbid she go alone.” Said the first companion.

“What about that Cragor fellow? He would fill the fourth spot.” Said the second.

“It seems this is all we can do. Messenger!” The yellow trousered man said. A messenger wearing a black suit came in.

“Yes m’lord?” asked the messenger.

“I would have you go to Sir Cragor, and notify him of my need to speak to him. Bid him come here.”

“Yes m’lord.” The messenger bowed then left.

“Now we wait for him.” Said the man in yellow trousers.

 
 

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7 Jun 2004:-) Anna M. Mortensen
Not much to go on yet, but the dialogue is very drawing and gets your attention. Good job!
8 Jan 2005:-) Zachary Cassity
lol I'm no writer but yeah the dialogue is great, really makes you wonder who their talking about.
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