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Marisha Forrestine Parker

"The Tragic Story of Black Turtle" by Marisha Forrestine Parker

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Okay, this tiny story is really nutty. We were doing a writing excercise in Writing Class where we had to pull objects out of a hat and write a story about them. I pulled out a black turtle, a wierd chinese statue thingy, and a pink necklace. Thus, this story. It doesn't have any magic or anything like that in it, but it could never really happen, so I guess it's fantasy. ^_^0
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In a murky swamp, far away, among some rock and flowers, lived Black Turtle. He lived a peaceful life, except occasionally, there were dangers... WONK! A Chinese Emperor lifted his cane off of the smashed turtle. "Yummy." he thought. "Turtle soup." He picked up the smashed turtle. While he was walking home, he saw a beautiful pink necklace lying on the ground. He picked it up, and as he did, a giant Pink Turtle smashed Chinese Emperor to take revenge on Black Turtle.
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20 Apr 200145 Lim Hwei Lin
this was funny. actually pulling things out of a hat is a very good way to start writing.Yeah. ^_^ My writing class was really cool! ...But then the teacher decided not to have it any more. *sniffle* *sob*
27 Apr 2001:-) Joost, A.K.A Lopting
Uh... Ok, so did you pull a giant pink turtle from the hat, aswell? Like it! It's funny!Nope! I thought up the giant pink turtle all by myself! Aren't you proud of me? ^_^ *angelic smile*
Thanks!
16 May 2001:-) Matt Morris
Hey, why you no tell me you have writing nest up, hmm???? 2 We did a similar excercise at a writing camp I went to last summer, only everyone had to work the same 10 items into a story, in one of three styles: romance, fantasy, or horror. Fun stuff! Cool little story btw. ^^
7 Aug 200145 David W. McEntee
Considering your luck of the draw, very nicely done.
8 Aug 2001:-) Christopher 'Topher' Allen Shepard
I never go to Wyvern's Library because I'm too lazy to read the stories, but what a pleasant surprise this was! First of all, what a unique name for a story! "The Tragic Story of Black Turtle", that title sucked me in like an inebriated moth to a kaleidoscopic disco ball. Also, the story wasn't 20,000 words long! It was short, sweet, unique, original, and extremely funny! I'm proud of you for making such a good story! and I don't even know you! Hey! This comment is as long as your story!
4 Jan 2002:-) Eric J. Hopkins
Uh... uh... oh gosh, now who stamps on pink turtle?
7 Dec 200345 Melanie Ashton (Ha!)
This is funny! It reminds me of another story I read with similar humour that no one else really seemed to find funny. But I love this story! It's grand.
7 Dec 2007:-) Vrijvechter
Hehehe... great! I´m going to try this too...
13 Mar 200845 Daniel fiant
kinda weird
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'The Tragic Story of Black Turtle':
 • Created by: :-) Marisha Forrestine Parker
 • Copyright: ©Marisha Forrestine Parker. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Chinese, Death, Emperor, Smashing, Turtle, Turtles
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