|6 Feb 2005|| Shannah Goss|
Yay I can do the First Comment Dance *Attempts to dance then falls in clumsiness) Oops. Anyway, I like this one too, it gives good discription of the mermaid while still allowing you to use your imagination and come up with how she looks in your head. Kathryn Aliwoode
replies: "*is flattered*"
|10 May 2005|| Sharon *Blackstaff* Black|
The only thing I don't like about this poem is the line "How nice to be a mermaid"- I don't know much about poetry, but it seems to clash with the rest of the poem. Something about it being speculation while the rest is observation, I think. Kathryn Aliwoode
replies: "You have a point there...hmmm, must edit that"
|1 Jun 2005|| Rachel LA Simon|
|25 Oct 2005|| Dan Shevock|
Nice little glimpse at a mermaid. Kathryn Aliwoode
replies: "*doesn't know what to say*"
|24 Feb 2007|| Kyndra|
Wow, with every word u wrote, i could picture it. Very good.
|7 May 2007|| Laura A. Farrar|
Very beautiful! I enjoyed that greatly.
|30 Jan 2008|| Dragon’s #1 fan|
I agree with sharon, but its an awesome poem! (sry 4 spelling) You can actually see a mermaid!