Document 5 out of 5 by Amanda Rene Bussell.

SciFi and Fantasy Stories: Neverdying Love

A poem from the POV of an immortal who can't live without their lover, though they were mortal and have already died... (can also be read at http://www.fictionpress.net/profile.php?userid=154927 )

Main Category: [High Fantasy]

Sub-categories: [Dark, Gothic] [Romance, Emotion] [Vampires ] [Undead]


	I run to you I see The way the world turned so cold I sleep in you I dream Of the fever your touch flares in me I dance through you I sing About angels watching over saints I drink of you I cry When I see how I drain your life away I mourn for you I die As soon as your soul disappears I dream of you I long For a day in the ground with you I kill for you I scream Begging a god who won't listen I lie with you I sleep Forever alive I sleep in your grave I breathe of you I waste I will never die, but with you I'll pretend

Date	Name	Comment
24 May 2003	Whitney J. Darlaston-Jones	Loading... woh...such feeling - it reminds me of Aragorn and Arwen - it conjures the most moving and amazing images - i wish we could study stuff like this in english in stead of the crap they dish out at us. i love it -Wheee, Aragorn/Arwen... it wasn't for them but you're right it could rather fit o.o ^^ I'm glad you enjoyed it so, am very flattered
14 Jul 2005	Emma Kathryn	Loading... Oh god this is so touching. You get into this character so well, you have a gift here girl. This is so sad; you can understand thei logic but you can't help but pity them. sniff...must not cry...! Lotsaluv, Em PS I LOVE cyberseed! Just thought I'd let you know that!
28 Sep 2005	Erin Melissa Washburn	Loading... Very moving; I like the way you measured your line breaks to emphasize the message. It reminds me of a poem my friend wrote, which was also about forbidden and restricted love.
2 Oct 2007	Melissa zuniga	Loading... This is quite wonderful

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SciFi and Fantasy Stories: Neverdying Love