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SciFi and Fantasy Stories: Green and Grey

I've wanted to write a story about Tasmania for a long time. Those that live here often grumble and complain about the weather, unemployment, the price of petrol and so on, but deep in our hearts we love our quiet little island and are proud to be Tasmanians. That's why it hurts to see its unique natural resources being needlessly destroyed.

This story is a tribute to Tasmania's magnificent old-growth rainforests.

Note: 'obliqua' and 'regnan' are species of eucalypt, the biggest trees in Australia (and among the biggest in the world). The story of El Grande is true.

The names of the forest spirits are all names of actual Tasmanian forests under threat from logging (with the exception of St. Clair, which is actually a lake forming part of the Cradle Mountain Lake St. Clair National Park, an area which has been protected forever from logging and mining activities).

The 'aboriginal' language near the end of the story is not real-- I made it up, except for the word 'Trowena' which IS a real word, meaning 'Tasmania' in Palawa kani (a language used by Tasmanian aboriginies).


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The leaves were cool and soft beneath the woman's bare feet as she walked through the ferns. Huge fronds arched over her and around her protectively like the wings of great green birds. The woman did not push them aside as she went, but let them reach out and stroke her smooth pebble-brown skin and slide through the delicate fabric draped around her slender body. As substanceless as spider silk, it caught the faint breeze and trailed out behind her like a broken web. The fabric was coloured in mottled shades of green and grey and the pattern shifted with each movement -- whether a simple trick of the shadows or something more mysterious and magical could not be said.

Tarkine was old by human standards, though forests had a much different understanding of the concept of time. To a forest, age meant familiarity and wisdom. Tarkine knew that she had been here long enough to become sensitive to each minute change in the sweet, clear air and deep, rich soil; to the flora and fauna, and the wide, cold, southern sky had become so familiar to her she regarded it as her sister.

But the world seemed to have turned darker in a way she could not identify, and now her sister, too, was weeping.

A final frond left a dewy trail across her cheek, like a tear, and Tarkine paused to listen. Normally the rainforest resonated with birdsong, echoing and musical, but today there was a heavy silence. It was so thick that she could feel it creeping along her skin like oil. Even the breeze spoke only in a barely audible whisper.

She lifted her head, her earth-brown hair falling back to reveal a face that bore an uncannily human likeness, but the saddest human to ever live had never borne the expression that Tarkine now wore.

Her eyes were depthless brown, flecked with yellow and green like the damp leaves beneath her feet. They caught the light from the distant canopy like still rock pools. She stared at the pale grey sky between the branches. No wedge-tailed eagles circled above. She knew they were hidden in the highest branches of her beautiful obliquas, keeping a sombre vigil.

Tarkine sighed-- the sound like that of the last leaf falling at the beginning of winter. The light in her eyes dimmed.

Something wet and warm touched her hand and she looked down. For the first time in the passing of many suns and stars, she smiled-- a small, sad smile. She knelt in the leaves and stroked the creature's face.

The thylacine opened its jaws in a toothy yawn and licked her hand again. This animal was the last of its kind. Tarkine had hidden it, sheltered it with leaf and shadow and dappled sunlight so that the pale-faced humans would not notice it was there. She was afraid that if they discovered it existed they would slaughter it as they had the rest of its kin.

She stroked the creature's coarse, sandy-brown fur absently. Humans often came to walk beneath her trees. She could feel their heartbeats and their footsteps thumping on the soft earth. She could hear their thoughts, which were strange and complicated, humming inside their heads like dragonfly wings. Most of them simply came and looked and then left, but in those brief moments, joy and awe radiated from them. Those were the humans Tarkine loved.

But there were others… others like the ones who had killed her thylacines. They did not smile at the birdsong. They snapped the branches that sought to touch them in welcome. They looked at the trees, but they did not see them; they saw something else, something in their own minds. And then they had come riding huge creatures made of metal with too many angles, which frightened Tarkine with their alien noises and unpleasant smells, and they attacked her.

They tore at her borders with furious hunger. She tried to understand their intention and motivation. Had she angered them? Did they require the trees to build their shelters, as the now-vanished forest children had before them? Why then did they take so many? Why did they burn her with great fires that burned long on the horizon? Why did they poison her beloved animals and leave them to die?

A perplexed frown creased her smooth brow, and her eyes glimmered with emotion. Everything around her, everything she knew, was familiar. She had thought she belonged in the world, that she understood it. But she did not understand this.

She got to her feet and resumed walking, letting her feet take her where they may. The thylacine followed her companionably; the forest remained silent around them. A wallaby pricked its ears and stared at her as she passed.

Tarkine turned solemn eyes to it. Go, she urged. Do not be afraid, but go swiftly. It is no longer safe for you here.

The wallaby bounded away without hesitation.

It was then that a loud crack split the air, quivering the forest floor and all the trees. Tarkine felt the ensuing crash echo deep into the bowels of the earth. At the same moment, an agonising pain shot through her left hand and all the way up her arm.

She gasped and looked down to see a dark line tracing itself across the base of her left index finger, just above the knuckle.

Tarkine could do nothing but watch in nauseated horror as the finger dropped away, severed cleanly from her hand.

Shocked and dizzy from the pain, Tarkine let herself sink onto a mossy log, clutching the wound with her good hand. Amber liquid trickled between her fingers and spattered onto her knees.

The groans of hunger from the metal beasts jarred her bones. She could see the smoke now, drifting through the pristine rainforest like a sour fog.

Tears pooled in her eyes.

With pain thumping through her body, she did not sense the approach of Styx until her thylacine gave a small growling yelp of welcome. She blinked the tears away and looked over her shoulder.

Styx stood behind the log. His skin was grey-brown, like gum bark, and his hair-- dark brown like hers-- fell to his waist, entwined with leaves, twigs, moss and ladybirds. His eyes were a haunting golden-brown, and held the memory of many sunrises and sunsets. Tarkine respected Styx, for he had existed long before herself and his knowledge of the world was great.

The old forest spirit gathered up his tattered grey robes and stepped over the log to sit beside her. He said nothing, merely took her mutilated hand as best he could in his own and held it.

His own hand, though, was no better. Only three digits remained. She looked into his face, and despaired at what she saw there. His skin was covered in chips and cuts, and his temple was caked in dried amber sap.

Then he turned to look her full in the face and she gasped, her eyes widening in horror.

A large chunk of the left side of Styx's face was missing, charred black in a huge, horrendous scar. Tarkine was devastated. Unable to hold back her tears, they splashed glittering down her cheeks.

Styx reached up and gently brushed them away with one of his remaining fingers. Still he said nothing. There was nothing to be said.

They sat in silence for a while; watching the smoke and listening to trees tumbling to their deaths in the distance. A kookaburra, unnerved by the strange sounds, flapped off its branch to land on Styx's shoulder. Eventually, he spoke:

"El Grande is lost."

Tarkine nodded without looking at him. She knew. Every forest, every tree in every park and suburban garden had felt the death of El Grande. It had been the mightiest, greatest tree on the island, a giant, ancient eucalyptus regnan. But the humans had come, as they always came, and unleashed their merciless fire.

The fire had swept over El Grande's feet, and the magnificent tree had died.

It had happened many suns ago. Styx was aware that she knew, but she could sense that he felt the need to speak the words aloud, as though hoping the breeze might take them up and bear them away to where the humans watched atop their metal beasts, hear them and understand his pain.

But the humans could not hear anything.

Or perhaps they didn't know how to listen.

Tarkine sensed a sudden change in the composition of the forest, and a moment later a figure appeared in the trees. A shift in the light off to Tarkine's right suggested a second presence.

The forest spirits approached calmly and quietly, ferns and hanging moss trailing over them. They stopped before her, and their faces were grim.

Styx got to his feet. Despite her pain, Tarkine joined him, clutching his arm for support. The taller of the two newcomers cradled the body of a young forest spirit in his arms. The body was severely broken and lacerated, appendages were missing and his brown skin was horribly charred.

"Hellyer is lost," said Blue Tier. He laid the boy gently on the ground; his normally bright cerulean eyes dim with sorrow. Tarkine noticed that Blue Tier's silver-blue skin was marred as well, though not as badly as poor Hellyer or old Styx.

Tarkine felt helplessness welling inside her. "Why such destruction?" she whispered. "Is there nothing we can do?"

St. Clair stepped forward. Her smooth skin, unlike the others, was completely unmarked, and dark as the shadows inside hollow logs. Silken green hair as vivid as the moss fell about her shoulders, and her beautiful golden-green eyes glowed like the sun through new leaves. They sparkled not with tears but with wisdom and hope.

She took Tarkine's injured hand in both of her own. Tarkine felt vibrant energy flood through her, easing her pain. "Do not despair," St. Clair told her. "Humans fight for us."

"Humans destroy us," Styx creaked in a low, angry voice.

St. Clair turned a level gaze on him. "Not all of them," she said. "There are those who still cherish us. You have seen them." She looked at Tarkine, Styx and Blue Tier in turn. "You will not die. Humans will protect you, as they protected me."

The spirits looked at each other, but were not convinced.

"It is not enough," Styx sighed. "There are too few."

"Then we will assist them," St. Clair replied.

"What can we do?" Tarkine repeated.

St. Clair knelt by the body of Hellyer and placed her hands upon it. "We will give them what they covet and we have in abundance…"

Blue Tier knelt beside St. Clair and placed his hands upon his stricken brethren as well. "Time," he said.

Tarkine hesitated, then did the same. "Time," she repeated.

Styx, however, remained standing, a deep frown on his brow. "It will not work," he growled stubbornly.

They waited.

The thylacine stared up at him. The kookaburra flew away. The smell of smoke filled the air.

Styx's frown deepened further. Finally, reluctantly, he knelt with his fellow spirits and placed his hands upon the body. "Time," he muttered.

From beneath the fingers of the forest spirits, a thick moss sprang up. Fungus and tiny flowers sprouted and spread, consuming the body of Hellyer. Slowly, he disintegrated like a rotting log and returned to the earth. St. Clair closed her eyes. "Mupangkawi pala Trowena," she said softly. Everything belongs to the land.

 

 

On the edge of the rainforest the trees rustled, as though in a sudden gust of wind. Ferns swayed. Vibrations rippled across the earth and through the metal bodies of the great machines, but with the crash of timber and the rumble of engines the humans did not notice.

Until their machines inexplicably stopped.

Overhead, the slate sky grumbled and sank low, and rain burst from it in torrents. Crackling fires hissed and spit in protest, but were drowned in a flood of black mud. The humans jumped from their machines, yelled at each other through the rain and tried to figure out what had gone wrong.

When they checked their engines and fuel tanks, they were dumbstruck to find them clogged with plants and vines, and the metal rusting before their eyes.

Mupangkawi pala Trowena.

 
 

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DateNameComment 
10 Jan 2005:-) Vanessa Kersjes
Guess i get to write the first comment 1

I loved your story! I have no idea about the technical side of your story, but it swallowed me and brought a lump to my throat. I could feel the pain of the forest. Bravo!

What a shame I cannot give away a mod's choice because this should get one.

:-) Megan 'Angler' Proverbs replies: "Thank you! That's okay, I have four MC's already, but I greatly appreciate the sentiment. Poor old forest spirits. Humans squabble amonst themselves, but no-one ever cares what the forest thinks..."
11 Jan 2005:-) Becca Lusher
Always you have ways to silence me, and this was beautiful, completely and utterly.

I feel mean to mention it, but it stuck out - "Crackling fires hissed and spit in protest," - I think that should be spat. -- Yes, it should, thank you.

Anyway, back to this. I hardly know what to say, you drew the pain of Styx so well, it is understandable that he was the last to agree. The pain of the trees and forests came across so well in this that I felt teary towards the end.

Beautiful. I can't really find much to say except that this is a strong, thoughtful and powerful piece of writing. (It does deserve an MC - and numbers mean nothing, me dear, it should be about the writing.)

*bows* It's like Ferngully, but different (ignore me)

:-) Megan 'Angler' Proverbs replies: "A lot of feeling and emotion went into this. It's one of the few things that I have strong opinions about, and I wanted to express my feelings in some way. I'm touched that people understand what I was trying to say.

Indeed it is about the writing, but I don't get disappointed if I don't get MC's because I've already achieved more than I ever dared to hope. If you guys think this deserves one, that's good enough for me."
13 Jan 200545 D Joelle Duran
Becca suggested I drop by and read this, and I'm very glad she did.

This is just incredible! Where was the heart of the Mod that read this?! Not with the forest, I fear. But I'll third the vote for a 'reader's Mod, at any rate.

This reminded me in some ways of the last piece in Fantasia 2000 for the beauty you evoke in your description of the forest spirits. It reminds me of 'The Lorax' (which changed me forever when I encountered it as a kid) with the sense of tragic loss, of beauty and purity marred by greed. That scene where her hand was wounded was shocking in its abruptness and brutality.

I read this at work, and it was a fight not to break down crying. I so loved the thylacine too, I keep wanting to hope against hope that there's still some out there...

Just a fantastic, powerful, and wrenching piece of work!

22 Megan 'Angler' Proverbs replies: "Wow. Just... wow. I never imagined that this would be received so well. Thank you!"
2 May 2005:-) Cecily ´SLWS´ Webster
They're so gentle you feel they really are part of the land, things of earth that just grew with the trees...this is really beautiful. I'd like a little more of the blue and grey tones somewhere, probably poor Styx's marred skin - I have a thing for eucalyptus - but other than that, nothing. [walks around story] It even had a thylacine! I bet there's not another in the whole 'woods [sadly] like the Earth...thank you, it's gorgeous.

1 Megan 'Angler' Proverbs replies: "Thank you very much! Yes, thylacines are a big part of our folklore, so I couldn't not include one. Their sad plight also serves to illustrate what can happen when people go around recklessly destroying things. *sigh* Too late for the tigers, but not quite too late for Styx, Tarkine and the others."
24 May 200545 Stephanie (to lazy to log in)
Oh, wow. Megan, this is a wonderful story. I am really bad at crit, so I'll make this short. A fabulous story, and I love how you used to forests to name the people. This is wonderful.

1 Megan 'Angler' Proverbs replies: "Thank you, Steff!"
1 Jun 2005:-) Panu Karjalainen
I like how you present people not as inherently good or evil but as inherently confused. It always seems to be too late when mankind has figured out something important's been lost...

Nice work. Has got the kind of feeling that keeps slapping you on the face with its vividness. I felt the dialogue was too stiff, though, but seeing as these were spirits talking, not people, I can almost overlook it. Your use of semicolons felt a bit excessive for me, it is quite a strong punctuation mark, stronger than comma in any case; but then again, I have had a slight aversion toward semicolons for years now. Maybe I ought to get medication for that...

Yes, the dialogue... it's supposed to be like that, I didn't want them to sound too human. And being tree spirits, they're not used to talking. (Or it could just be my inadequate writing abilities. *cough*)

The semicolon thing again? I'm trying to cut down, really I am! But they're just so tempting... mmmm, semicolons...

Save some of that medication for me, would you?

You really lived through this story, didn't you? Well done.

:-) Megan 'Angler' Proverbs replies: "Yes, I definitely did. This one comes straight from the core of my heart."
30 Jul 200745 L. Shanra Kuepers
'ello! Back. ^-^

to the flora and fauna, and the wide, cold, southern sky had become so familiar to her she regarded it as her sister. Eh, yeah, bit of weird punctuation there... ^^; I think that semi-colon doesn't need to be there, or needs to be moved. I was trying to say she was sensitive to the flora and fauna. The bit about the sky should probably be a separate sentence...

humming inside their heads like dragonfly wings. *beams* I am rather fond of being descriptive.

A large chunk of the left side of Styx's face was missing, charred black in a huge, horrendous scar. I agree. I think that any living thing that can survive standing in one place for centuries deserves to be revered, or at the very least respected.

But the humans could not hear anything.
Or perhaps they didn't know how to listen. Hmm, I never really thought about it that way before, this being a more symbolic than literal piece, but it's a good point. I suppose new growth would have a healing effect, yes, whereas the damage done by humankind tends to be permanent, or doesn't encourage full renewal.

*can't help but peek through the comments* Aye, quite like Ferngully without being Ferngully. For one, I like this much, much, much better. It's absolutely gorgeous. I loved the descriptions in this and the subtlety with which you've described the forest spirits. I may not know the history of them (thank you for providing that information in the description), but we can deduce it from the story. It's such a beautiful and poignant touch. It only serves to make the piece more tragic, though, to know that it's so... mired in truth. It's sad what we do to the world.

Tell me about it. It's a huge issue in my part of the world. The government here wants to build a new pulp mill at the same time as trying to promote the 'pristine wilderness' to tourists. >.

I think that that does have a potential to overtake the excellence of the story as a story, but then I guess that comes with the territory. Storywise (and I'll just treat this as not real for that, since it'll help me stay focused), it's brilliant. Very, very powerful. I'm glad I had some cheerful song (that I don't know) playing while reading this, otherwise I'd have cried. It's just so beautifully thought-out and so beautifully written. It's extremely vivid, even for someone who's never seen Tasmania (or Australia).

It's just... Beautiful. *bows* This is a marvellous piece.

:-) Megan 'Angler' Proverbs replies: "Thank you! Tasmania is a wonderful place. (Apart from the moronic government currently running it, that is.)"
8 Aug 2007:-) Liz Verde
Oh Megan, this piece was heartbreakingly beautiful. The emotion behind it was captured superbly. My heart just aches whenever I drive throughout our beautiful valley or sail on the lake not fifteen minutes from my house and see the destruction of the forests on the mountains - the huge clearcutting scars from logging marring the mountains' beauty. It's just so sad to think that if humans were just a bit more interested in conservation and took preventative measures instead of waiting until it was too late to try and fix things, we might not have a lot of the shortage problems that we have today. I also loved the thylacine ... I did a project on them for first year biology and what an interesting creature they are.

1 Megan 'Angler' Proverbs replies: "Thank you very much for your beautiful comment, and so sorry for this extremely belated reply. ^^;"
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