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SciFi and Fantasy Stories: Music in My Apartment 2

A continuation of the original.

    Main Category: [Modern Fantasy]
    Sub-categories: [/Fairy, Fay, Faeries] [Humorous ]

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Music in My Apartment 2

 

It’d been two days.  The landlord had stopped by, and poor Trish was now gone.  I’d underestimated my landlord… instead of getting mad, as I’d expected him to, he’d been very calm as he hammered the eviction notice on my door.  Trish had warmed up to him right away, running up to him and jumping up on him to lick his hand; silly mutt always did like people, no matter who they were.

 

After he’d left and taken Trish with him, I’d managed to jam something into the window enough to allow me to leverage it open somewhat.  For once, I was honestly glad for my small size; I didn’t need a lot of room to get out of the apartment, after all.  I mean, I wasn’t even an inch tall, for Christ’s sake! 

 

Those two days I’d been cooped up had had their advantages, however… I knew how to fly quite well by this point, since Trish had decided that chasing Master-that’s-now-really-tiny-and-looks-remarkably-like-a-dog-toy was a fun amusement to pass the time.  I flitted down to the landlord’s apartment, peering through the grime into his place.

 

He’d adopted Trish, from the looks of it.  Bastard wouldn’t let any of his tenants have pets, oh no… but now here he was, feeding Trish along with two other dogs and a half-dozen cats. 

 

Cats? 

 

Terrified, my gaze slowly moved over to the right of me, where two large eyes stared right through me, gauging my possible escape routes.  The orange tabby was crouched on the next windowsill over, his butt wiggling in anticipation of the kill.

 

Squealing in terror (I hadn’t had a normal voice since I’d become a damned fairy… how macho can you be with a voice that sounds like it can break glass, after all?), I flew straight upward, hoping for altitude.  The cat pounced, his claws just barely missing me.  His paws did hit me, however, sending me cart wheeling off to the left of the building. 

 

I was alive.  My heart pounding in my throat, I continued flying upward until I reached the top of the building.  I landed on the edge of the roof, panting to release the tension and fear levels somewhat.

 

This wasn’t good.  Not good at all.

 

I had to find those fairies again, and somehow try to convince them to change me back to normal.  But where the hell was I supposed to find them?!?  Hell, I was no bigger than an afterthought to most birds and cats… I had no illusions about my survivability on the outside world.

 

But I had to find them… I didn’t have any choice. 

 

Where to start… I could visit the docks, I mused… didn’t fairies like water, or something along those lines?  I couldn’t remember, all the fantasy and books of that sort having been read way, way back in my past. 

 

Come to think of it, I don’t remember what the last book I read actually WAS.  Maybe I should have paid more attention to that particular thing… Lord knows, it might have helped me out in this current situation.

 

A flapping of wings behind me caught my attention, and I grimaced as I turned around.  Pigeons.  A group of seven of the rats with wings were staring at me, trying to figure out whether I was friend or foe.  I shook my head, taking to the air and leaving my home behind as I turned toward the docks.

 

As long as I didn’t become fish food, I mused, I should be safe enough sticking fairly close to the water line and hiding underneath the docks themselves.  I shouldn’t attract any untoward attention if I was careful…

 

Or so I hoped.  Grim, I flew onward as the sun began its descent into the western sky, painting the clouds with hues of red and orange as the land beyond gobbled up its form greedily.  Somewhere out there, I could faintly hear music… music I remembered very, very distinctly… and I had to find it.

 
 

©Matthew T. Summers. All rights reserved!

DateNameComment 
31 Dec 2003:-) Claire G. Griffin
I liked the description of the pigeons. Disgusting birds...anyway, cute little continuation. More would make everyone happy, I'm sure.

2 Matthew T. Summers replies: "I've never been fond of pigeons, and I think that shows. 12 hehe.. I'm still trying to think of how I'd continue this.. perhaps a way for him to find some way to turn back? Hmm... >Matt"
21 Jan 2004:-) JM Larsson
I've read both parts..


::whistles casually::


:21truggles::


::breaks::


More! MOre!


::throws herself down on her knees for emphasis::
... Please?


::gets up, dusting herself off:: *ahem* I, uh, liked it. *piratey grin* And I say more, Mr Summers.


:21alutes her rapier suggestively, but vaguely enough, and walks off grimly::

2 Matthew T. Summers replies: "More will be coming, I was actually brainstorming on it last night. 2 >Matt"
10 Feb 2004:-) Dtauri
Well it was well written as ever Matt but I have to say (fearing retribution from all the fans above) that I thought it was quite cool that it ended with part one... I do like at the end, though, where you've reminded us about the music and given him a motive (and, cunningly, opened it up for further writing 1

2 Matthew T. Summers replies: "oh, it will continue... I might be lynched otherwise. 12 They're making me write, I swear!! lol... >Matt"
30 Mar 200445 Heather C. Sluys
*lol* Don't let anybody make you continue something when you feel like it's already finished ^_^

But this stuff *is* good. That poor guy could be potentially eaten by all sorts of domestic and wild fauna! XD

1 Matthew T. Summers replies: "Oh, I'll complete it one of these days. I enjoy the character too much to leave him hanging. lol.. Glad you liked it!! >Matt"
9 Apr 200445 Kay (K is a pirate) Fox
although it is little, I like what is there. I always wanted to read more of this story.

*frowns*

but it ends on another half-ending. I want to know the real ending. Or the very ending. What am I trying to say? I don't think I know. wait, what I'm trying to say is write more!(please?).
I know that in many above comments you have already said that you will write more, but I figured that it wouldn't hurt to ask ya one more time. 12

If it were up to me, I would keep that man a fairy forever because I am in love with fairies, but that's just my opinion. ^_^

Of course, you could always have it go like this:
=^.^= *meowwwwwwww*
*pounces*
*little fairy man screams*
*wings hang out of =^.^= mouth*
*=^.^= is full and grining*

2 Matthew T. Summers replies: "{chuckles} It will have an ending, I promise. One or two more to go, not entirely sure yet.. But I just have so much going on at the moment, I'm afraid. >Matt"
8 Jul 2004:-) Chris A. Jackson
I see you couldn't resist continuing this one... I'm glad. I like it. I don't know if I would have chosen the docks, however. Maybe the library, where he could read up on faeries...

1 Matthew T. Summers replies: "  yeah, had to continue it. 12 Now I need to finish it... just need to figure out *HOW* to finish it... >Matt"
27 Jul 200445 Kay (K is a pirate) Fox
That's okay, there's no need to rush finishing it, as long as you finish it eventually...

We are all busy sometimes.

:-) Matthew T. Summers replies: "Oh, I'll finish it.. just have no idea as to *when*. Life's like that.. lol. >Matt"
28 Jul 200445 Stephan Calloway
no idea when? the let us help you determine when. NOW is good... I'm not fully into the "no rush finishing it" but then, you know me - patience is definitely NOT one of my long suits...
Seriously, Matt - this is great. The storyline, the idea is so perfect for the imagination - and you've got his reaction dead-on. As always - an impressive job well done.

1 Matthew T. Summers replies: "LOL! Well, I kinda based his reactions off of what I imagine my OWN would be. 12 hehee.. and yeah, yeah, I'll get working on it. I'll add it to my to-do list tonight, I swear. 12 >Matt"
2 Aug 200545 Tim Woodard
Eep, poke. Update more stories...work is boring! Need more reading...damn you coffee...eep!

Btw: Great work! Loved it wholly. Good detail and sentence structure. Um, oh ya, more! >_>
8 Apr 200645 L. Shanra Kuepers
Awwww.... It's a pity that Master-that’s-now-really-tiny-and-looks-remarkably-like-a-dog-toy makes one of the lines have huge spaces on my screen. It really irked me, though I know it's hardly your fault. Still, could be something for you to look at.

I hadn’t had a normal voice since I’d become a damned fairy… how macho can you be with a voice that sounds like it can break glass, after all? <- stylistically, I think this might be stronger when put in dashes, but it's a great commentary. ^-^

survivability on the outside world. <- in, no?

WAS. <- urgh, do you have to use caps for that? Whatever's wrong with nice italics? Sorry, seems to have become a pet peeve of mine. Make of it what you will. ^-^

You realise that this is in no way an ending to the story, don't you? These two pieces would make a wonderful prologue to a novel(la) though. ^-^ They're lovely. You've got a wonderful turn of phrase and a lovely grasp on the voice of your viewpoint character. Loved the little descriptions and the overall feel. Loved the ending, lack of ending that it is. Open is good too, after all. ^-~
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