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SciFi and Fantasy Stories: PlanetSide

PlanetSide is the result of Vel learning the hard way to not give me ideas. :) A group of stories, all tied to a main Sci-Fi theme of being an evolutionary experiment on a square planet. This is the introduction, though the stories themselves will be of one of three races: Humans, a dog/human hybrid, and a heraphradite race, all placed into different environments to see how they evolve to their surroundings.

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The Experiment had begun.  The Experiment was not approved by the Galactic Review Bureau, but it continued.  It was decried by nearly every race in the universe, but still it continued.  It was declared a crime against nature, and still it continued.

 

Monies and credits were shuttled through illegal and severe methods to the originators of the Experiment.  When the originators were tried, convicted and executed, the funds went to their successors.  Succession for the Experiment was as illegal as the experiment itself, but still it continued.

 

A lone star had been chosen, far away from prying eyes.  A lone, white-hot bringer of life, devoid of any unnecessary planets or moons.  A young star, still in its infancy, with enough of a gravitational pull to keep the Experiment in orbit without attracting too much attention.

 

Over an eon, the Experiment began to take shape.  The Planet was constructed, one ounce of matter at a time.  Careful deliberation went into every single aspect of the Planet, and to facilitate better observation, the roundness of the planet was corrupted and restored, destroyed and rebuilt time and again; until at last, a final design was agreed upon.

 

The Planet would not be round, as most planets are.  The Planet would be forced into a square shape, and six different environments would be created on each face of the Planet.  To force the planet to retain its shape, intense gravitational generators were constructed along the edges of each face of the planet.  These gravitational generators pulled on the surface of the planet, raising great mountain ranges along each edge.  So defined, the construction of the Planet continued.

 

The gravitational force had one adverse effect, however.  The epicenter of each face was pulled downward slightly, creating a bowl when viewed from a distance.  It was not so severe as to prohibit life, however, so after years of argumentative deliberation, it was decided to allow it to remain as such.

 

Environmental terraforming science was used to create the environments in pairs; tundra and jungle, grassland and desert, swamp and mountain.  Each grouping was placed on opposite sides of the Planet of each other, one to a face of the Planet.  The planetary die now showed signs of life, as weather patterns began to form.  The weather was carefully moderated to allow the various faces to retain their individual ecosystems, which in turn allowed life to flourish.  The effect of the gravitational pull on the planet caused most water to run to the center of each face, creating great lakes of fresh water in the epicenters of every face of the planet. 

 

The question arose on how to observe without being seen.  So moons were created, and placed into fixed orbits around the planet.  Each face was assigned a single moon, which was set to rotate at the exact same speed as the face itself.  Therefore, from the surface, each moon would be in the exact center of each face, and would never move during either the day or the night.  Upon these moons, observation decks and stations were constructed to record the happenings on the surface below.

 

Finally, the decision came to be as to the population.  Three races were chosen to inhabit this world, and under the regulations of the Experiment, they would be allowed to evolve and grow as they see fit with no recollection or awareness of anything beyond their face of the Planet. 

 

The first choice was easy.  Humankind has always been known to be the most adaptable, the most varied, and the third-most reproductive.  The human advantage would serve them best in the grasslands, so that was their first placement.  On the opposite side of the Planet, humans were also placed into the inhospitable desert region, though it was debated as to the survival rate of this group.  The Humans did begin to flourish in both regions, however, proving the skeptics wrong.  

 

The next race was genetically created for the sole purpose of the Experiment.  Canines had always been associated with Mankind, but the canine race alone would not flourish enough for the Experiment.  So, the decision was made to genetically modify a race of canines, splicing their DNA forcibly with Human DNA.  This hybrid race was then implanted onto regions more suited to their physical structure.  One group was placed into the jungle, another into the frozen tundra.

 

The final race caused many, many years of discussions.  Finally, the choice was settled to a sexless race newly discovered on the outreaches of the galaxy.  Though they did not have a name as of yet, as they had not joined the Galactic Unity, the race had some unique genetic codes that were not present in many other races.  Plus, since little was known about their racial lifestyle, it would prove to be a learning experience beyond what could be projected through the Experiment.  These were placed into the final two regions, swampland and mountain.

 

Finally, the Experiment was ready to begin.  The races all were reduced to pre-awareness levels, and slowly began to evolve according to their surroundings.  Thousands of years went by, and the races became more comfortable and evolutionary suited to their environment.  

 

The Experiment, named PlanetSide, had begun.

 

 

 
 

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4 Aug 2004:-) Jeff Burke
I can get in, right?

*pleading look*

:-) Matthew T. Summers replies: "lol.. anyone can write or draw for it. hehee.. first, go through the tour, get an idea of how other people did it (and there are some DARN good stories on there, btw...) Next, check http://www.livejournal.com/users/netpoet22/7902.html for the guidelines. Lastly, let me know when it's up and ready! I need to add another one or two anyway, so if you get it up fairly quickly, I'll be able to get off my tush and get Pside actually UPDATED. hehee... >Matt"
4 Aug 2004:-) Jeff Burke
First, thing: a typo.

:::"Genetic codes not present in other races*'*" you forgot the apostrophe. I'm assuming you do want the possesive, there.


Second: I want in. How do I do it?
5 Aug 2004:-) Jeff Burke
slight reccomendation: modify the intro. It says on a square planet.

is the planet really INFINITELY THIN, because squares only have 2 dimesions. It couldn't have any depth.

Suggest you use "cubic" instead of square.

:-) Matthew T. Summers replies: "Er, yes... cubed planet. 12 >Matt"
25 Oct 2004:-) Emilie Katter
ooo very nice ^.^ but what does the unknown/new race look like? Just wondering really, maybe in the next part we will be described to? But other than that, can't wait to see more ^.^

:-) Matthew T. Summers replies: "Best suggestion is to take the tour. We've had a few people write about the race, so it'd be better described by them. 2 >Matt"
27 Oct 200445 Stavros Tsiakalos
Very inspiring Matt! I got two or three ideas for the odd PlanetSide shortstory myself now. Once I am done reading through everything the other wrote as well I'll sit down and write something.
Your writing is great as always. So great that I am going to be annoyingly picky and complain about this sentence: "the race had some unique genetic codes that were not present in many other races" if the genetic code is unique wouldnt that mean it wasn't present in any other race? 10 Sorry couldn't resist.
This is a very inspiring setting you have created.

:-) Matthew T. Summers replies: "lol, duly noted. 2 Glad you liked the intro, you'll definitely want to take the tour if you haven't already. There are some just OUTSTANDING writers in there. Looking forward to what you can come up with!! 2 >Matt"
29 Nov 200445 Jessica L. Stachyra
So I've been seeing the planetside tour all over Elfwood and I when I came to your library and saw "planetside" I though I'd give it a read, and WOW! ^_^ I think I'm going to take the full tour now and read all the rest! This is most interesting, you really are an amazing writer!

:-) Matthew T. Summers replies: "Lol.. glad you liked!! 1 >Matt"
15 Dec 2004:-) Mandi L. Creguer
Id seen you mention planetside but never actually seen or read anything until i found this tour at the top of one of your other stories. Didnt actually read the story, i clicked on the tour first, and im very glad i did, cuz now i get it all in the right order, yay!

:-) Matthew T. Summers replies: "Well, hopefully you got the rest of the writers on the tour as well, there's some darn good ones on this tour. 2 >Matt"
23 Jan 2005:-) Lydia *Battery Operated Trumpet* McOscar
Now I'm all disappointed. This looked like a really cool concept, and I manage to discover it once the tour was gone. Phooey. Any chance it'll ever be back? Because this looks like one of the most intriguing things on Elfwood, and I'd love to see what others have drawn/written!

Q; How was the idea born? I hope you're paying your muse overtime.

Anywho, this looks like a great idea. I have some questions about how the moons on the bottom and top of the cube managed to revolve without moving off their sides, but that would get confusing and it's sci-fi, after all ;-D Keep up the genius!

:-) Matthew T. Summers replies: "Do a search for PlanetSide, you'll find them all that way. 2 The idea came because it's VERY dangerous to float ideas past me, even if you don't intend to. lol.. glad you liked it. >Matt"
10 Apr 200645 L. Shanra Kuepers
Oooh... Those first two lines are really chilling. Gorgeously wrought. ^-^

as they see fit with no recollection or awareness <- saw, I think you want for symmetry in the grammar.

This... This is one of the most gorgeous creation stories/prologues I have ever read, Matt. It's beautiful, well deserving of the golden feather! More than well-deserving. You get a wonderful feel for what the PlanetSide stories are going to entail (*makes note to look those up when she has time*) and gives them all a very sinister look. Puts the other piece on your shelf in a bit more perspective as well.

Gorgeously wrought, creepy story. Wonderful job! ^-^
3 Apr 2008:-) Heidi Hecht
Ooh, an illegal experiment! This would make an excellent prelude for a novel. How does each civilization adapt to its side of the cube? And do they ever find out they’re part of an experiment?
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