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SciFi and Fantasy Stories: Fairy Crossing Chapter One

'Fairy Crossing' has been a story I've been working on for about a year and a half now ((mostly because of much editing and writer's block on my part o_o)) so here you are, Chapter one of my first ever fantasy story, 'Fairy Crossing'. I hope you guys like it! >.<

    Main Category: [Modern Fantasy]
    Sub-categories: [Fairy, Fay, Faeries] [Royalty, Kings, Princes, Princesses, etc] [Magic and Sorcery]

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Chapter One

Ah, the woods. My second home. The smell of damp leaves, the crunch-crunch of twigs beneath my feet, the never-ending love song of the birds in the canopy above; total bliss. Further and further into the woods I went, letting nothing but total instincts direct me to my unknown destination. I’ve never gone this far into the woods before, but I didn’t want to turn back yet. With every step I took into the dark abyss of trees and fog, I felt all sense of humanity leave me. I was becoming one with nature.

Suddenly, I stopped. I found myself in front of an unpaved path, one had never seen before in all of the three years I had been exploring in these woods. The way seemed sinister, especially the way the shadows danced across it. The path looked old as if not used for over millennia. “Should I go on?” I thought to myself as I took an uneasy step towards that mysterious path. And as if by an invisible switch that was flicked on inside my brain, I took another, and another. Soon I was at a fast pace, gaining speed with every step I took.

Faster and faster I went. Not realizing I was running now, I almost tripped over my own feet when I had stopped. Before me laid a field of green. In the middle stood an oak giant with its hair a deep sage and powerful oak arms hidden beneath. I sensed something different about this tree, and strange, just like that unpaved path I was just traveling upon. Cautiously I walked towards the tree, awake and alert. The hairs on the back of my neck stood on end as my feet came to a rest at the foot of this silent giant of wonders. My eyes averted downward (and to this day I still don’t know why) to a strange ring of clumped grass that seemed to surround the tree, as if locking it in some sort of prison.

Without thinking, I laid my hand upon the trunk of the oak giant, but instead of my hand laying to rest on its coarse surface, it went right through! Surprised, I lost my balance a bit an tried to pull my hand out of the tree, but to no avail. My hand would not come out. An icy feeling spread through my chest, gripping at my heart. Again I pulled and tugged at my arm to get the giant to let go of my hand, but suddenly, I felt something tug back. With a startled cry, I was pulled into the tree, but I felt no pain. It was more like a gushing wind, mixed with the tiniest pricks from hot embers. It was dark and dreadfully terrifying. Then with another tug I was pulled away from that exotic, horrid feeling, and pulled into the bright sunshine.

 
 

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25 Jan 200745 ashley O'connell aka Gaurdian angel
A good start. Keep on going.

1 Corrine 'Princess Muffin' Hunsher replies: "THanks! 1"
3 Feb 2007:-) James P-W
Very nice. Comments:
1)it's a little too short
2) "hair" seems akward in the context of an oak tree. I "get" the image, but it just seems a little off...I can't put my finger on it.
Otherwise good.
17 Apr 2007:-) Désirée Ruth Dippenaar
Hoo~ Good beginning! I like the descriptions! ^^ Especially in the beginning. The ending of the chapter was excellent too! Haha~ Because now I'm curious about what will happen next! ^.^ *bounces off to the next chapter*

44 Corrine 'Princess Muffin' Hunsher replies: "Oh! I'm glad you liked it! 1"
8 May 2007:-) Sarah-amy haley
I really liked the narrative style of this and you use good descriptions and imagery as well. The end sounded quite frightening, I know I'd be terrified anyway. Now I must go and read your next piece.

Nice work 2

13 Corrine 'Princess Muffin' Hunsher replies: "Why thank you very much! I'm very glad to hear you enjoy my story so far.And Yes, I'be terrified myself if I were sucked into some magical tree, yikes!"
1 Jun 2007:-) Lauren Rebecca Tindle
Your words peice together so nicely, You should definitely post more!

:-) Corrine 'Princess Muffin' Hunsher replies: "don't worry, more of it is on the way soon! You can count on it as early as monady"
16 Oct 200745 Tabs
all i can say is AWSOMEEE


<3 ya < (that means love u)

"its a fairy stick" t hee

:-) Corrine 'Princess Muffin' Hunsher replies: "teehee Fairies! <3 ya back Tabs"
17 Oct 200745 Tabs
WOW =0 so far i'm impressed this is like one of my romance novels

Keep writing
<3 tabs

:-) Corrine 'Princess Muffin' Hunsher replies: "...um, you realize you commented this twice, correct lovey? eh, oh wells. I'm glad you like it. *sniff* I'M SO HAPPY!!! T0T"
8 Jul 2008:-) Gwenivere Stephan
Nice beginning! Very good metaphor on the tree, though of course you probably already know this ;p I like this and will try to read the rest as soon as I get the chance! Sounds exciting

:-) Corrine 'Princess Muffin' Hunsher replies: "I glad you liked it so far. It still needs a lot of work though."
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