SciFi and Fantasy Art: Ryuko's Discovery

Very expressive expression on the face. (is that a real english sentence?) The gi-like garb gives a nice asian feel to the pic. Since you are using PP5, maybe experiment and try to add a bit o shadow on the inside part of the wing? I didn't add more shading mainly because this was an experiment with fill styles, including the decorations on the edges of her gi.

Now she rocks. I love that pose! I also would love to see a bit more shadowing. If you need help, Let me know!Thanks, Cindy.

The oriental feel in this picture matches the black and gold colouring. The glyphs on the gi give it a very finished look. finally the position she's in makes her look like she's too big for the page, she looks little cramped and this helps the illusion of size along nicely.She's only a little over 8' tall...! ^*x-^

This definately needs some shading. I didn't understand your reasoning for not shading it. I think this combination of dragon and human looks deformed. (shrugs)

The curve of her breast goes up to far. It should curve in a little, going at an angle slightly higher than the ribcage. With the looser fit of the clothing, a fold line that starts at roughly the nipple and goes towards the armpit, and a drape line starting slightly below and going towards the belt would look better. ( I use clothing catalogs as a reference for how fabric drapes over the body. It helps a lot) As my only other point of suggestion, you might want a darker background - or at least one that she contrasts with a little more. Possibly a dark blue - it would bring out her mane & tail fluffs.