| 16 Nov 2000 | David Andersson | ooh, not bad, not bad at all! Keep up the character drawings, those are your best. Just keep a keen out on legs and arm so you get them right.  Monica A. Caples replies: "Y'know... these are kinda stiff. Note to everyone: This picture is old. *grins*" | |
| 4 Jan 2001 | Andrew P. Morris | I don't think it is the limbs, her head may be a tad large. But it is difficult to say, I think you did a wonderful job of capturing motion with this one.  Monica A. Caples replies: "Obviously, capturing motion was entirely the purpose! Really! I promise! > " | |
| 12 Jan 2001 | Dana L. Kubilus | Ah, a nice pic, I like the shading on the legs and the ribbons best myself. As far as the body goes, and I've noticed it in some of yer others pics as well, something just seems a bit...off, the proportions methinks. I think that the shoulders might be just a tad too small, and the legs just a tad too short, it's nothing serious, just something that you get better at and such as you go. But then again, i'm not too good at bodies either. It's a lovely pic none-the-less ^.^  Monica A. Caples replies: "See... My legs are kinda short, and my shoulders are about as wide as my hips... So, am -I- disproprtionate? 'cause man, that would sure figure... *grins* Thanks!" | |
| 28 Mar 2001 | Linda Gock | I like the shading heaps, especially the way you did the hair, it looks very realistic. I think what they meant with the arms is that the way they bend it looks very 2D, when in fact ther left arm should be more facing towards us so the joint should overlap a bit.  Monica A. Caples replies: "You know... I think you're write. I hate it when I feel like a dufus! I'll remember that for next time, thank you muchly!" | |
| 15 Apr 2002 | Gary Keenan | Truely dazzeling, i Love how the ribbons twirl around her limbs.   Monica A. Caples replies: "Whee! Thank you!" | |
| 4 Jul 2003 | Anonymous | I know what the problem is, the lower arm is out of proportion & the upper body is slightly too long. But it really is a wonderful picture! | |
| 7 May 2004 | Rachel B. | Cool i love this | |