It seemed that people weren't entirely satisfied with the original beginning, so I decided to create this!
This is the sad story of a merchant in the grips of a crisis, life is crashing in upon him on all sides, and he can find no happiness. Only through outside intervention can he see the joy in life. A must read.
...I know that I'm not supposed to begin with the third chapter, but I'm not satisfied at all with the first and second at the moment, so here it is... I'm not satisfied with this either (I'm sure I could put a little more effort into it) but I'd enjoy some criticism, so criticise! Angelstorm
Dakarys, a Child of the Blood of Angels, learns that he is more than mortal, and is, in fact, in the middle of a war between Heaven and Hell, angels and demons, and halfbreeds like him will make all the difference. But whose side is he on? Follow his journey and his struggle to fight the most terrible battle of all - that of his own soul. Chapter Four
Dakarys, a Child of the Blood of Angels, learns that he is more than a mortal, and is, in fact, in the middle of a war between Heaven and Hell, angels and demons, and halfbreeds like him will make all the difference. But whose side is he on? Follow his journey and his struggle to fight the most terrible battle of all - that of his own soul. Chapter Five.
From an Angel's point of view, here is an account of the day Lucivar and his followers were banished from Heaven... A rare up-close and personal look at the entire issue.
I originally wrote this to go with a series of pictures I drew. The poem pretty much describes the drawings too. It's not long but I like it.
This is more of a philosophical monologue about the reasoning of devils and why they do the things they do.
Wow this turned out dark. Probably the most chilling and gripping story I've yet written. I couldn't believe how, well... horrible (in a good way!) the ending turned out to be! I shocked myself! =P Oh and by the way, the changes in the font shows who's point-of-view it is from in that part. I think that by the second paragraph you'll know who is who.
I wrote this waiting in line for my perscription at K-Mart. Grammar is right out the window with this one! Make of it what you will, for that is its purpose.
Hmm... not quite sure how o describe this one... might blossom into something bigger... I quite like Ilieth... but anyway... this is for Gabs for either 500 or 750th commenter status... though I think she got both... regardless... it's for her and I'm glad to do as such! Oh yes... one warning before you begin... I think I dub this the darkest of my writings...
A poem that i did about the world's end. This is (i guess) how i pictured what will happen. I hope you like it!
The ongoing story about Winterblaze. This one deals with how his powers first came out. Rated PG to PG-13 (violence, abuse).
Well here is the second part in my work to keep the timeline flowing. Unfortunately I made some changes and so I'm going to have to rewrite the next chapter too. Heck might as well redo the whole thing, might change the story quite a bit too. I think the part I'm doing now can wait until I've explained the characters a little better. Let me know what you think of the changes made in this chapter. Mainly just the first half or so is different, I didn't change the ending too much. Sorry if its a hassle to go through again.
This is just a short poem about love that was not meant to be. The structure of the poem is symbolic of the relationship of the people involved(a celestial and a mortal). They alternate speaking finally coming together with the bold text that both speak only to be drawn apart again. Even the amount of syllables in each line depict this. It can either be read as one poem or the italicized lines can be read as one point of view while the plain text lines are the other.
Perhaps this is a prologue.. I'm not sure yet. Um. Not much to say.