I think in my next update I am going to add this to chapter two and make chapter 4 into chapter 3 to make this chapter. In this chapter Sydor tries to leave the village alone under the cover of night, but ends with a friend to go with him... edited 2/28/06
This chapter is a little faced paced. It may be a bit hard to follow, but I plan to work on it as I am able. Enjoy these updates, let me know if your reading.
Melody and Amolas have an awkward moment.*sniff* poor Amolas. He spends a bit of time with Griffin. The next morning Sydor wakes and finds out from Dameon and Amolas that Meldoy has been captured/kidnapped by?
We learn more of Melody's past and that of Amolas , even Dameon. An conversation passes between Sydor and Dameon.
Here is the next installment of the Forbidden Children, I just finally had the timet to put it up. Enjoy and let me know what you think. I am not particuarlly the hugest fan of the this chapter, I may have to rewrite this one a lot.
This is set years after the prolouge. You learn more about Sydor and a few surprising things happen. Edited 2/27/06
This is the final installment in this little short story. It is a side story to the You Can't Fly story. I am considering incorporating it into the other story at some point, but it reveals some important details and I am sure some who have read much of my writings will make some connections *wink* *wink* When I first began writing You Can't Fly, the only connection I thought of was the name, but then slowly things began to take shape. Enjoy! Let me know what you think :)
This a prolouge to my story. It helps give some background to the story and how a certain charcter is found. Edited 2/27/06
Here is another short chapter. Amolas is pretty much healed, but Sydor won't wake up. I edited it some, but its still short. 5/5/06
This chapter involves a few things and Sydor does something both and unexpected and possibly dangerous. edited 6/5/06
Dameon meets up with someone from his past. Sydor uncovers something about the avariels and Melody and Amolas disocover an odd tapistry.
This is where the battle begins and Sydor is also faced with a life changing decision Edited 2/28/06
Sydor, Amolas and Melody meet someone new and after a bit and not completely willingly allow him to travel with them. What they don't know he is more than he seems
This chapter is broken up between all the characters. Its quite interesting and may reveal a few things
This chapter may be a bit short, but it shows the Melody has come out of her shell a bit. A funny moment between her and Amolas
This is the next chapter, this one needs a bit of work. There is more after the ending of the chapter that I have written, but I don't like the way it is going so I am going to work on a rewrite of it, before I post anymore. Enjoy these two chapters. I can't believe I actually got some new stuff up. I hope to get more up as soon as I can. Enjoy, let me know what you think. I also think this part needs a bit of work.