It's just the beginning... and normally I wouldn't but something this unfinished up here (At least the Guardians Prologue is a whole section.) but I'm looking for some feedback to see if this is in anyway understandable. This story takes place in the same world as a manga I'm working on with a friend- a solar system in which the sun has shrunk and the Earth is dead, and the remanents of humanity hide away inside 'ARKS', which are part of the orbital ring mentioned here.... Anyway..... Yes, The main character is female, and yes, she is 1500 years old.
This is the 5 chapter. I think Maxx talks the most in this one than in any other chapter so far. And please remember... this is a little cat doing all this damage. Never thought a cat could do anything more than scratch when faced with a bath...
This is my favorite poem. It is my first poem to have 2 lines per stanza instead of four. I was in the library looking out the window when I wrote it.
This is the conclusion to my vampire three-parter. In the previous installations we met Andrew, Aven, and Terra. Aven's action-before-thought personality gained him a mysterious, fragile fledgling of his own, and not everyone will sit still for such a development.
The basics you need to know to keep your dust bunny pet happy and healthy. (may be taken down soon, not sure!)
I realy enjoyed writing this, but while writing, did not enjoy the situation that inspired it. Bah, I hate it when people I love travel without me, especially in planes. -.-
Just a short few lines, but I think it's really powerful. It has a harder, angrier edge than usual.
okok, yes yes yet ANOTHER poem about,.. that evil ol world. mhm. im cynical i know maybe even sinister... but i like this poem:) its kinda neat and has that weird touch again. i know the ryhme is cheesy, but its kinda supposed to be, in all of these. because im REALLY sarcastic, and thats just one of my ways of making fun of the world, heh. anyway, enjoy:)