...I know that I'm not supposed to begin with the third chapter, but I'm not satisfied at all with the first and second at the moment, so here it is... I'm not satisfied with this either (I'm sure I could put a little more effort into it) but I'd enjoy some criticism, so criticise! Angelstorm
From an Angel's point of view, here is an account of the day Lucivar and his followers were banished from Heaven... A rare up-close and personal look at the entire issue.
I wrote this waiting in line for my perscription at K-Mart. Grammar is right out the window with this one! Make of it what you will, for that is its purpose.
This is my first update in literally a year. This is a little poem about the niceties of Satan and Hell (so, light reading then). Hope you enjoy.
A shadowy predator of the dark becomes obsessed by a young preteen girl.
Before telling the tale of the wars in heaven, some things are required learning... Nothing too facy... But you should not judge this as a story written by a christian evangelist in the least sense of the word. this is a work of fiction, based on spiritual themes, it is only a coincidence they use some similar terminology... confused yet? Read the prologue and maybe you wont be :)
now we get to the story itself... This story is about an angel who finds himself in the the middle of the greatest of all struggles... The war in heaven.
Dominic tries to get Helen back, with little success. More will be coming soon!
Written at 11:00 pm on Friday January 6th, 2006. My first poem of the year! And admittedly a rather half-arsed attempt at poetry...so far the two reviews have been good ones, but who knows what the Elfwood populace will decide?
The beginning of a metaphysical tragicomedy in 2 acts
If you don't go to heaven, you go to hell, right? Well it doesn't always work that way.
The first in the 'Rift of Existence' timeline so far. Way before the rest of the story, but still important.
Back in high school, we read Dante's Inferno. And then wrote our own Hell Paper. Hehehehe. kailing-.NOSPAM.-@davidbowie.com
Well, these are the verses that will be appearing in the prologue to the second book in my series. That book is still a long way off, but I feel like posting the poem right now. So, enjoy!
This story was inspired by my brother. He needed me to create him an evil fictional name, so I did. The name sparked this story in my mind...