hmmm just a little bit about the story... mainly so you can know what's going on in my crazy mind... more will be added later... and some of it might even change...
A work in progress. A detailed look into the racial traits, the ecology and the culture of the Kevali people. Please offer constructive criticism and ask lots and lots of questions... there's a lot that needs added to this, but i've srot of hit a brick wall in terms of knowing exactly what. So let me know what i've forgotten, things that you'd like to know, point out apparent errors etc.
This leads to a much LONGER series that I'm writing, titled Celestial Eternity. I'm really looking for critiques on this, good and bad alike, but please only constructive! Please leave a comment or e-mail me and let me know if you want to read more.
This is jsut the prologue, its crappy, but i couldnt think of much to say for now, ill fix it when i finish the story, im working on two stories right now, one i already got 14 chaps. on it and this one which i only gots 5 but im more intersted in this one right now, and i had put the other one off to the side for now