The first chapter of my novel about a boy who finds out that he is not human, and is forced to fight for both sides in a war for Earth's survival.
Marthallia (pronounced Mar-tall-ya) was obsessed with perfection. She demanded it from all in the fae over which she reigned as Sitting Dark Faerie Queen. With all her skills, knowledge, and sense of style, she ruled without empathy and compassion which caused the Council to harshly banish her from the queendom of the fae. Forced to live the rest of her life in the wilderness of the Human World, Marthallia will learn the importance of having these qualities when demanding perfection. She must meet this challenge, learn to live as Human, and endure tough situations without the magic of her faerie powers.
This story opens up with the awakening of the magic garden in the bright morning light and the introduction of the main character, Erin, a beautiful young teenage girl who lives at the center of the garden...with all beauty and grace. Little does Erin know the wonders and whimsy of this ethereal garden as she lives day to day embraced by the beauty of it. What strange powers sit within the magic garden?
In this chapter, we flashback to a time when the garden was young...and the old man that owns the garden BECOMES young!
This is the first chapter of my story. I won't deal a lot with magic until about the third chapter so please be patient. I'll try to get the next two chapters up in the next couple of weeks. For the dictionary for this story go to: http://demo4amodiasart.bravehost.com/dictionary.html
Umm... ya this is just the preface for the story I'm writing. Hopefully more will be up soon.
Introduction of Amaurea, and the start of Vahie's memory sequence. Finally a bit of explanation as to the waking dreams and mind powers!
this is about where a girl finds out she has powers and is sent off to a boarding school, (powers academy) she finds friends with the telepathic group.......
Avriel, a young girl with power magic, is sought out by the Government and on the run in an old ship with her siblings. They will do anything to harness her power. This first chapter may be slightly confusing but things will be clarified in later chapters.
One of the better pieces I've written so far. I don't want to accidently ruin the story for you by telling what happens so I'll just let you read it hehe... I tried to put in some mystery, though this is only the beginning and it only gets better as you read. So please comment and tell me what you think! *goes to work on Part 2'
The story keeps up with the theme from the last chapter, adding more interest to the story in general I'd say. The reader learns who the dark stranger was, and what has become of Rollins.
Mystic is in love with Hosh even if she has to fight a vampire for him!
a short story may equal up to half a chapter but it's my first story i've ever written
The continuation of 'Shadow: The Begining' here Jake begins to realize his powers.
This is the third installation of my Elsiana book (yet again I'd like to know if anyone has any names, leave them on my comments and I will take them into consideration) and therefore the fifth and sixth chapters. The previous chapters weren't that good since they were written a little over a year ago versus these that are far more recent, so I thank you for bearing with me through the torture that was me setting the book up when I was twelve and experimenting. There's a little more romance and action now and I had some fun with emotions and different points of veiw. I would also like to address the fact that a few of my friends thought that these were diary entries and I'd just like to say that they aren't and I only include the date for the sake of not confusing anyone (or trying not to). Enjoy
I originally wrote part of the story open eyes in first person, but lately i've converted it into third person and i'm slowly making progress on writing the novel.
Yes, there is a part two! Lina wakes from her coma tose state only to find Sage watching over her. The healer, Viyana, and Sage bicker out in the hall while a mysterious child attacks Lina.
Ok so this isthe start of a piece of work so please point out any mistakes or anything else you think i need to improve on. i am thinking about writing another chapter if people like this so please comment and suchlike. i think i should give some background on this story so that will probably be part of the next chapter... and could anyone suggest a better name? i dont really like this one but i couldnt think of anything better. thanks.noodle.
A novel under works I have been tihnking about for quite the bit now.Work is slow as I don't write very often, however it is advancingANY and ALL FEEDBACK WELCOME, wether good or bad
Chapter one of the first novel, following the prologue. Someday Wars is actually the name of the epic as a whole, the novel does not yet have a title. My un-official readers group is proving slow to respond, so feedback is extremely welcome, thanks.