This is a possible prologue to my book. I am still not completely satisfied with it and I am open to suggestions. I'm one little insecure writer. Thanks for your feedback
Talin and company are finally nearing Blith. What would they find there, the city known for its glamour and planning?
Fate bides her time, but always catches up. Tune in as Talin and company renew their acquaintance with someone they've met before...except things are a bit more complicated this time around.
A tribute to the Queen of Ice, part of the standard repertoire of any respectable Ailurian bard. Yes, my darlings, I have finally actually written music for it and will perform it on February 27th at my senior recital.
I can't really call this a prologue because as the title suggests it takes place somewhere roughly in the middle of the story - well, probly closer to the end actually, but either way, this bit does come first. It's set in a different unfinished world, where the natural things that usually occur in our world have to be controlled by people... this is the story I've had most fun thinking things up for, even if I haven't writen it yet, and definatly plan to continue when I have time! I really want to get this one right because it actually has a point (!) so constructive criticism would as always be nice... and yes, the ferret talks ... :~]
Chapter Three. George and Iynmiir have a little walk and find an unpleasant suprise waiting for them when they get back...
Felisaer is caught unexpectedly, and exiled falsely by her worst enemy.
Felisaer becomes the hunter, instead of the hunted, and discovers something horrible.
The first in a small series of short stories I plan on doing. This one involves a young mage, and the dangers of a sorcerer's love
In this part of the story, you are introduced to the main character and her family. You are also given hints of the world she lives in and what her magical powers may be. Comments and Critiques highly encouraged- an ongoing project... will take a while to finish but I need all the help I can get :D
Raised in the agricultural country of Gorthica, Talin had no idea what the future had in store for her, but first, she need to know why she was 'hearing' things.
A terrible accident, and an anxious gryphon awaits.
Two new companions join the group, though one has Felisaer's capture in mind.
A life is extinguished abruptly, with lies and fear fueling the fire.