I hope you think it's still going well... You'll have some action in the next section (pgs 16-20), I promise. Anyway, until then, enjoy!
Welcome to my mind. Take a look at my depression, my sorrow, my bitterness, my pain... take a look.
I wrote this after viewing an art gallery filled with projects that looked like a cross between H.P. Lovecraft and H.R. Giger... So, needless to say, it comes across sounding a bit demented.
Here we continue, the story that in some ways is the story of my life, being written as it goes. Maybe it will draw you in deeper... or maybe it will push you further away. But, one thing is probably true. It's still preparing you for what's to come.
He-ey! I'm trying to write a play! I've got to admit, I'm excited at the attempt (I've never written a play before)... But I'm looking forward to working through this one. I'd appreciate any tips of the trade from knowledgeable playwrites out there. :)
I was giving myself a little writing practice by listening to a song twice and writing whatever came to mind. Here are the results....
This is a seaman's ballad. Though it's impossible to give you an idea of how the song actually sounds musically, the note pattern for the chorus, at least, is: b e b d, c b a b, c b a b a g e. b e b d, c b a b, g a b a g a g f# e
I wrote this as lyrics for an upbeat type of song, so you're just going to have to picture a good ol' twelve string guitar strumming away in the background. ;P
For a creation mythos, I had a lot of fun with this one. I hope this will perhaps stir up some creative juices. If anyone else would like to write a story set in this world, I give my permission to do so as long as you let me know so I can read it. ^_^
Alright. You finally get to see some action, and get to start wondering about some more things... You may also note that somewhere around this point the story starts to feel a little different stylewise? Or maybe not... I'm wondering if that's something I ought to work on when editing.
For everyone who's begun to read The Dance of Freedom, this is a chapter out of history for that story, having happened almost 5,000 years before the events in The Dance of Freedom. It is also a complete shortstory- no more will be written upon it.
This is a cryptic prophecy envisioned within the world you might read about in 'The Dance of Freedom'. *chuckles* Let's see if you can figure it out! This is one of my few attempts at non-prose, poetry-wise... I hope you like it. If you can, read it out loud. The effect is much better! :)