I hate this chapter, i hate everything about it, but untill i finish the rest of the book/story i cant do anything about it at all. I would leave it off except you guys need to at least know what happens that the cracks. There is a lot more here then meets the eye (i hope you noticed :-)) I promis better chapters to come!
This is Phoenix1 upgraded! Nothing has really changed in the story itself , just a new look. And an attempt to put things in proper order on the main page!
Phoenix 3 (sorry nothing new) changed a little, re-formatted the text. It looks different at least...And before you ask, i'm not sure yet...
chapter three in my Gatekeeper chronicals. I managed to finish it! Its pretty short, Raven stays passed out the whole chapter but we Meet Eric, prince of the Darke, hear of Greyowl and finally get to see our very own gate. Also more references to the 'evergate' (remember the prolog? hmm..wonder whats with that anyway...) Hehe, enjoy.
Ahh..here we go. Raven, all grown up and completely unaware that her insanity is not insanity at all but a combination of her magic trying to break free, warning's that the bad guy is on his way and the gates trying to contact her.
The beginning of the book i'm working on. I know, it needs a lot of work, but if i didnt put it up, how would you know that chapter one had anything to do with fantasy at all? There is the first mention of the 'EverGate' and much much more!