Ok, I kinda jumped the gun on this one. This story is nowhere close to finished. I wanted your thoughts more than anything. Thats why I posted this section so soon(I have other sections written but I have not put them up). The main character (who has no name yet) is part of a race of shapeshifters called the Ekar who spend their whole lives in what they call their preferred form (what they choose to look like) as opposed to their base form (the form in which they where born). They do this becuase they belive that too much emphasis has been placed on appearance as opposed to personality. There is another culture of shapeshifters called the Kinesh. The kinesh use their ability for financial gain,and they only change form for jobs. So please enjoy and tell me what you like, what you hate, and why.
Ok guys don't be too hard on me. I wrote this story over a year ago. Its hard for me to read it without trying to change the stuff that doesn't flow well. This is a vampire story enjoy (I hope).
Here is my attempt at a sestina. A very rigid style of poetry. I wont try to explain it because that would be too difficult. I only wrote 3 stanzas. The subject is a very well known childrens story. I hope that doesn't make it fan fiction. I'll keep my fingers crossed.
This isn't poetry.It's something called nano fiction,a complete story in 55 words, no more no less. I wrote this because I liked the idea of having the resolution be death. And irony is always cool.