This I did for my sister, as a graduation present from NAVY boot camp. She absolutely loved it, and considering I did it in under a week I'm proud of it. Hopefully you all see it in the same light as I do, but comments are more than welcome!
This is sort of how the Hobbit would be, a story before the main stories. A sort of introductory story. Its only in the beginning now obviously, and I'm not sure if this is where I'll exactly start the story, but this is the only part written.