okay here it is.... its actually been done quite a while but my scanner broke ^~^ and well. okay i watched lord of the rings like 10 million times to try and get the poses right (well i kinda watched the beginning of when the orcs attack them in the mines, so i can still watch the movie) :P any way heres the completed one! ^-^ anymore advice on it will also be gladly taken! (also a couple of you wrote 'sorry about being so harsh' but ummm well ive been practically ripped apart...no ME personally but teacher criticed it on the walls they didnt know who's was who's so TRUST ME you were NOT harsh) ^-^ thank you again for all your help! oh yes i apologize for the STUPID black outline... i wanted to make her eyes stand out so i outlined them in pen and then they were tooo dark so i.... outlined the ENTIRE thing **blushes** i realize that THAT is a very.... ammature thing to do and ....... dont critize that please thanks.