This is the first in a series of poems; A bit of mystery, a bit of horror - lets see what we can do with it.
This peom was originally intended to be a sequel to An Angel Broken, but when I re-read through the Angel one, I realise having a sequel wrecked the whole image I had built up. So, when my brother suggested the idea of night and day and how they are continuously repeating, I took that idea. It fitted very well, I think. I'm not sure if I can forgive myself for rhyming 'high' and 'sky' though.
I think I can hear people screaming 'FINALLY!' I'm so sorry that this is so late! But even so, I don't think this one is as good as other stuff I've written. Any comments would be greatly appreciated! Also, different names for my characters. I'm afraid 'black' and 'teal' aren't very original... but, well, enough talking, more reading!
Ah, the first chapter! Shorter than I usually make my chapters, but oh well. If you like it, comment, and I will keep writing! :p
This story - I'll admit it - was inspired by my Cartoon watching days. Sort of a combination between Yugioh and Pokemon and Card Captors. Anyway, this is only the prologue, expect better from the real thing! Well, enjoy!
Ahh, the second chapter! Yay! A little bit of action at the end. I'm halfway through my third chapter so by the time this one gets up, I should be ready to put the other one up! anyways, have fun!