This peom was originally intended to be a sequel to An Angel Broken, but when I re-read through the Angel one, I realise having a sequel wrecked the whole image I had built up. So, when my brother suggested the idea of night and day and how they are continuously repeating, I took that idea. It fitted very well, I think. I'm not sure if I can forgive myself for rhyming 'high' and 'sky' though.
This is the first in a series of poems; A bit of mystery, a bit of horror - lets see what we can do with it.
I was reading alot of elfwood stories, and this came to mind... I might see if I can draw it!
I think I can hear people screaming 'FINALLY!' I'm so sorry that this is so late! But even so, I don't think this one is as good as other stuff I've written. Any comments would be greatly appreciated! Also, different names for my characters. I'm afraid 'black' and 'teal' aren't very original... but, well, enough talking, more reading!
Ah, the first chapter! Shorter than I usually make my chapters, but oh well. If you like it, comment, and I will keep writing! :p