Here we can see the real construction! Every single line represents something, they all work together to create and express. As you can see at the feet, my paper was too small >... I actually want to delete this one, disagrees or can I?
'Part One' Well I am already rewriting this, unsatisfied with my skills just yet.. But I've got this great story line in mind and I really want to put in down! Critique, tips and ideas are more than welcome!! Don't be carefull on me here!