Not much to say here, except whoo, chapter 3! Again, more details about world in general, and to some extent, what's going on.As usual, comments are much appreciated.
Chapter 2 at long last!Don't have much to say...more development, more explanation of whats going on, and the universe I've thrust you all into.
All in all, after much fiddling, I find I'm reasonably happy with this chapter. I didn't like it at first, and never could figure out why...but I've grown to enjoy it. I've also played with it a lot, and think managed to work out most of the little things that bothered me.Let me just say though, I love Violet. She is a blast to write.
looong ago lost in an elfwood crash, I'm 'finally' getting around to putting it back online. ^^ ...not quite sure what prompted me to write this, honestly. Just kinda hit me in a rush of inspiration...I usually don't do prologues, but it just seemed right at the time to give the reader some insight into the world my Smallest of Gifts takes place in. Tis important to note too, that this is just a brief history of sorts, and doesn't directly impact the story. Just shows what came before the present story, and a bit about the universe...just a bit.Anyways...enjoy! ^^
Spurred on by a good friend of mine, this was started many a year ago. What was planned as just a short story has since turned into a substantially bigger project than I ever intended. For that I am glad, because I thoroughly enjoy writing this.Tis a tale involving plenty of magic, wielded in the capable hand of Elryn, my little one armed mage girl.Hope you enjoy it. :)
This is basicly the first real story I've ever written. It's about, oh, 16 years old now, give or take. It's also unfortunetly as yet unfinished. It originally started out as a bio for a character I was roleplaying. Gradually my imagination got the best of me and it turned into something much bigger. It's age shows, severely, and unfortunately I'm pretty sure I'll never actually get around to giving it the rewrite it deserves.So why leave it up? Nostaliga maybe...not entirely sure. Perhaps as a way of remembering how much my writings grown over the years.
There's so much I want to say, and so many things about this chapter that I love...but I can't tell you. That would spoil the surprises.Hope you like this one as much as I.
Rather heavily modified from its previous form, primarily with the scene shifts to improve overall flowErm...not much to say, tis a bit shorter then the last two, but sets up a few interesting things into motion.
As with chapter 4, a lot of Stuff happens here that has lasting impacts, so I can't actually tell you about any of it. It's a huge change in the slowness of the previous chapter though.
Because we all need to be reminded that even the tiniest of things can have the biggest of impacts on us.A little story that came to me one night, taking place in a strange universe. Hopefully an intriguing, emotional little tale in the eyes of those who read it. :)
Chapter 3 in all its glory. Tis a bit longer then chapter 2, but that should hopefuly not matter.More plotting, more things gradually unfolding... Enjoy.
The continuation of the first half. This chapter is finished, but unfortunetly the story itself ends here.
Again, a loooong wait... I've had this done for a while, honestly, just never had the chance to put it online. Buuut....after long last, it's finally here. Sorry to all those who actually like Eryk, this ones all Elryn. ^^ Anyways, on with the show!I only request, as usual, you be brutally honest in your opinions. Theres a lot in this chapter I'm not sure about, and I want to know what everyone thinks of it. Don't worry about my feelings, crush them if you have to. :P
I'll admit, this wound up a lot longer then I initially intended...I think mostly because there is a lot of information to get out to the reader. All I'm pleased with how it came out. Tis a fair bit more Eryk in this one then Elryn, but I think that was sorta necessary.Random bit of trivia - up until this chapter, all Eryk's parts had previously been written in 1st person. Did away with em though, got too confusing with Elryn's parts too, and for a variety of other reasons.