Any and all comments and suggestions are greatly appericated. Enjoy! (p.s. the spell at the end is just changed up Latin and means 'fire from earth' or something similar ^_^)
This particular story I've been working on, on and off, for going on five years now. Which means that the storylline is kind of...young as I wrote the beggining in 7th grade. So anyway, please enjoy chapter one. As usual, constructive comments are welcome.