Still in sketchy-roughy-drafty-concept stage... I really want feedback on this one though so It'll be up as it progresses... Basically it's Persophone (of Greek Myth for those who don't know) standing in a field picking flowers... Suddenly she feels as though she is being watched (unbeknowst to her Hades IS watching her), so she gets up from her bent position. This is the moment right before she turns around and spots Hades, after which he will snatch her away and bring her to the Underworld with him to be his Queen. I'm going for the whole last look of innocence/hauntingly beautiful/suspenseful moment kinda thing... I really need to know what I'm doing wrong, and what I'm doing right. Feedback is MUCH appreciated!