Well, I finally got it done. The muchly revised edition of the second chapter of shadows. Go me. I hope you all like this one better than the first edition;)
My first attempt at Science fiction, though there's some old school dnd mixed in with it. Some of you may remember this from before the crash, however, I've made a few changes to the original.
Miriam is transported to a different world because of her brother's obsession with magic and power. Thanks to Alice 'Muffin Girl' Smith, and Bliss for their wonderful editing.:)
The beginning of Corrine and Desdemona's adventures together. thank-you Dan for helping with the title! Chapter 2 of this has been deleted, and for those of you who read it, you know why. for those of you who haven't read it, be glad i got to it before you did.