fallyn2

Hiya I'm Fallyn *points at the name above*22 years old and crazy. ^-^ I've been writing since I was about 8 and have recently finished the first draft of my first proper novel, co written with my best friend Lyndz. Some characters that will appear in these stories were created by and belong to me others by Lyndz and all are copyrighted to Lyndsay Gilbert and Helen Falls collectively. Hee hee. I am now a member of the Comment Exchange on elftown. Members of the Comment Exchange promise to comment on the galleries of those that comment on their own. so if you comment on any picture or on this page, I promise to reciprocate in kind... that is if you leave a comment stating, 'cool pic' you will earn one of equal value on your gallery, if however, you give a well thought out comment then you will earn the same in return. I can’t promise don't return comment for comment (though I will always try to), but the more you comment the more I am likely to comment more on your stuff. Still, I will return the favor in kind. One other thing, if I get mods choice ever I will try to return the favor of your comments but it may take me quite some time. I could write more about me but why bother. Hee hee. If anyone wants to contact me for what ever reason or chat on MSN my addy is below. :) Fallyn_Raine@hotmail.com Visit Lyndsay for great faery art and brillant stories/poems! *NOTE* I did have a list here that said what orders my stories should be read in, but the crash killed it, I will put a new one up though, as soon as my new ticket goes through. ^-^ Sorry I've been inactive since the crash, I wanted to wait until the bugs were all gone, which they seem to be!

Slave

*Recovering from the crash*Meh, I hate this title...if anyone could suggest a better one? Anyway, this is about my half dragon character Thayden when he meets the King of Epsilon (the man who enslaved his race) for the first time. Sorry for the bad description, I promise to upload a more exciting one when I'm not half asleep.*Disclaimer* In this story the character Mialyn belongs to my co-writer Lyndsay Used with permission. All characters copyright to Helen Falls and Lyndsay Gilbert collectively.

The Winter Queen

This is just a poem I wrote at christmas last year about the winter faery who brings the snow, or perhaps she's a winter goddess? Poems aren't my thing lol, but i do like the first verse.

Hurt

*Recovering from the crash*Major angst ahead, you were warned. :p After the War of the Phoenix, Jayd finds the price of fighting for good is extremely high. Due to the death of his soulmate, the idea of eternal life without her is too much to bear. His speech sounds a little weird, because I had to translate it from Alorian. Apart from that I like this part. ^-^

Secrets and Lies

Short little piece about Lyndsay's character Princess Sorsha of the Epsilon (Epsilon is a planet cursed to have no sun. The moons are the only part that have any sunshine, but as the Immperial Princess, Sorsha isn't allowed to leave the main world until she's married) and her love triangle. Poor Sorsha she has two pretty boys in love with her and she loves them both, whatever will she do? lol

Mirror Mirror

And a new piece! ^-^ I don’t want to say too much about this one, except that I was trying to create a creepy atmosphere. Please read and comment on this ^-^ I’ll give you a cookie. ***Edit** Wow...a Mod's Choice *beams like an idiot.* Just to let you know, I will return your comments on this one, it may take me a while though! ^^

Appraisal

Well this is a follow up to Lyndsay's part she wrote in which my dark elf character Brook met her light elf Gwyn. Please don't read this without reading the first part which can be found HERE! Anyway, like all my pieces I put up here it's quite short. Any crit would be greatly appreciated.

Fountain of Retribution

This is a just a random part of Forsaken I just decided to write. ^-^ Andreya (the vampyre) and Avayelle (the slave) are Lyndsay's characters.. There is nudity in this story (though not very descriptive) and very mild sexual undertones. If this sort of thing offends you please don't read on ^-^

The Dinner...

Hmm.. Okay this one is a little complicated to explain. Basically Jordan and Sorsha were going to get married but then Sorsha's affair with a slave (Ace) was found out. To make matter worse Ace is a Celestrian (kind of like an elf) and Epsilonians really hate Celestrians. Anyway Sorsha was forced to marry a very nasty prince from another world for a while. In the end though she got away from him and married Ace after all... But the course of true love never runs smoothly.... Phewf! Sorsha is Lyndsay's character. ^-^ Please leave comments/criticism.

Battle of the Mind

This a short piece to show how Jordan became Head Mage of Epsilon at the age of just 21. ^-^ Comments and Critism welcome. Raphael is Lyndsay's character. ^-^

Bright Stars

*Recovering from the crash*This is another random bit of Forsaken, where Jayd (Prince of the magickal planet Aloria) meets Arden (Courtesan to the Queen of the female dominated system of Demshalle). There is some mild hints towards a male/male relationship in this piece, so if this offends you please don't read on. ^-^ There is one word in a foreign language (Alorian) Lo-masa which means 'Thank You'. *Disclaimer* In this story the character Arden belongs to my co-writer Lyndsay Used with permission. All characters copyright to Helen Falls and Lyndsay Gilbert collectively.

The Rose

*Warning – Content of a Sexual Nature!* *Recovering from the crash*This is a cute little piece where two characters finally get together after many obstacles have been put in there way.Sorry for the bad description, I promise to upload a more exciting one when I'm not half asleep.*Disclaimer* In this story the character Katryna belongs to my co-writer Lyndsay Used with permission. All characters copyright to Helen Falls and Lyndsay Gilbert collectively.

As Black as Hell,

Just a little part of mine and Lyndsay's story ForsakeN. This is set when my necromancer character Jordan was head mage of Epsilon...and going mad. He did some really bad stuff.

Bittersweet

Evil has been defeated, the shadow on Epsilon is lifted and everyone is free... But not without sacrifice... This is a sad little piece about Lyndsay's character Avayelle and my Necromancer character Jordan. Any comments/critism would be great! ^-^