This is the first part where Khelekmir (the main character, also my Vaxian character) is actually grown up and capable of being the main character instead of some little bouncing kid that gets into bad incidents. Its just after there's been a big skip of years - and no, in Orpavia elves don't 'stop' ageing until they're fully grown...though most don't live much longer than humans...for...ah...that would be telling..
The very beginning to what I'm laughingly calling a book. But since I doubt I'll ever pluck up the courage to stop re-editing or even consider approaching showing anybody else, for how it remains merely a tale that I thought I'd better get out my head before it took up too much space. Oh, and its now about 90 pages long, here's a snippet from the very, very beginning. Welcome to Orpavia.
Yes, that is spelt right. This is the story written for when she first made an appearence in Ayenee. Even if it does finish part way through due to my lack of interest in finishing it. Comments appreciated and noted as always. Sliver can be seen in Collin Burtons Gallery and in mine (follow the link0. The original design was by a famous artist, yet I can't find an example right now, but will another time.