Squee - this is coming up quicker than I thought. Okay, here as the title suggests is some new characters. There's more than meets the eye with these guys, but you'll have to wait and see...
Okay, this is the shortest chapter so far. There is heaps of room for me to expand on, but right now... I'm too tired.
Things are moving now, things I don't even understand... Should make it interesting for all
Well here's chapter 2 (its in 2 parts cos its too long otherwise, trying to encourage people to read all of it). There's a couple of sub-stories that I'm having issues with (namely Jalithe's whole story) so if it seems a little disjointed in parts, this will be why. Any suggestions are as always, greatly apprieceted.
same as the previous part, explanation and setting up of future events
My first attempt at action and bad guys... Yeah I'm gonna re-write this one a few times. Not really happy with it.
This is the Water Nymphs view of the creation of their world. I'm still unsure as to where Im going with this, as I wrote it when suffering Writer block in my main story Enjoy, and please help me improve with constructive comments
Okay, this is the problem solving part of this Tunneling project. That's all I'm gonna tell ya ;p you have to read it to find out...
Everyone seems to be in trouble today. Who will come out of this alive
Sort of a chopped up chapter. It's been moved from its original place, and I need to do a rewrite. But its back to our Elven friends for a while
Visions to explain and warn. Tempers flare and lead to new discoveries.
Here come those surprises I promised!! I think I get better in the next chapter... I think :s
Time for a bit of a rest... for them not me... Sorry minor writers block, so this chapter is a bit of a gathering of ideas, and leading to where I wanted to be going in the first place (in like chapter 4?)
Well, here it is. Not perfect by any means, but the first draft of Chapter one of ?? (I haven't got a title for my book yet) This tells of the creation, and of two peoples. I know many of my characters need development and I'm starting on that now. Anyway, please leave comments, and help me pick up spelling/grammer/typos as the computers I'm using aren't so great (that's what comes of writing while traveling) Enjoy
Dum de dum dum... oooh what's going to happen next? Actually I don't know, finally this is all I have written thus far... your guess is as good as mine (well maybe)
um, more backstory and the setting of new plot lines (yeah I think I finally know where this is going)
Things are going badly in Yonbe, Chaos reins. You will meet many new friends, but how long will you know them before they fall to the Shadows...
Okay this follows from part 1. I'm gonna have to do this for a few of my chapters, as they're about 6-8 pages on average. Which tends to be a bit on the long side for online reading... So this in this part you get to see the Tunnel (so to speak) and some twists to the end...
Just a short peom I wrote while at work. Inspired by the Urisks in Cecila Dart-Thorton's BitterBynde Trilogy
Three go forth to seek the safe paths. Adventure lies before them, and danger lies for those left behind...
Well, this is sort of a fill in chapter. I've got an idea of what comes next, (okay, I've written it) but I had to get there first... Enjoy, and Please comment ... PLEASE>>
So Sari has got herself in trouble, Wonder who'll help her to get out of it.
This is a part of my novel that Im writing - first time anyone has seen it - it tells of the human's finding their home, and their encounter with the seafolk (similar to mermaids) Please give me feedack as to what you think, this is just the first draft... There will be more to come; promise