The eve before the Equinox, a strange intruder is found trespassing through the borders of the Guardian Woods. Also, a few little things: the pronuncation for the gryphon's names are Shai (simply 'Shy') and Fai (F-aye). Thanks and enjoy!
So here follows the account of the First Age, a tale of the War of the King and a record of the history of the unicorns. So this story be retold and repeated so long as the beings of Imbriuim bear life within their bodies. This isn't my usual writing style, instead it's more like a giant summary. I might, someday, make it into an actual story, but that might no happen for a while yet. NOTE: The name 'Al-Hawa' for the unicorn queen is actually a word in Arabic, meaning 'the Wind.'
Taking place at the ending of the First Age, Elliseilla, royal heiress to the throne of Lumain, must leave her one beloved. This is more like my writing style, and although I'm quite proud of it, I'm not entirely pleased. Something's not right about it, and I might combine the first chapter into it ... its rather short.