Well I haven't written anything in quite a while, so don't expect a masterpiece.This is an exerpt from IN THE EYE. The last in what I like to call part two. Where Fools Walk Freely is part one.In this chapter, Rae, is at the camp in Riverhoard, where people go to train. A few months ago, when she arrived, she could barely stand on her own, and would start babbling the words of her ancesters and rather inconvientent times. So she decided that she'd return to Riverhoard, to regain her strength and confidence. Now she's about to take on Foor, a rather arrogant prig.Casey is someone she's befriended.
Well I haven' t uploaded in a while. Actually I haven't really written anything in while. But I'm jumping back in whith a whole lot more ideas and a way better understanding of how this story is going to pan out. I'm sad to say that I will not be uploading anymore of Where Fools Walk Freely, (or at least not in any chronological order) the best we can hope for are exerpts. The reason I'm doing this is because one day I want to publish it, and the story up untill know hasn't really been that interesting. You can email me if you like and Ill send you the few experts I have so far. The good news is that I'm delving right back into Cross My Heart, which believe it or not, actually came first. But then i realized that the story was much better if their places were reversed and Voila. Two (eventual) seires about the same world. Comments on this would be REALLY appreciated. Don't worry about my feelings, please. Also everthing I post up here is a really really rough draft, I'm a teenager, we change our minds. Haha