This is cliche, etc. Not worth your read unless it's simply for the read. (i.e.: A typical random vampire encounter.)
An excerpt from a story I've been writing. This is the first and only section written in such a wordy fashion. And, to be clear, Aria is a vampire and very sensitive to light.. These are things you come to learn, but without understanding make this passage just the tiniest bit beguiling.
I wrote this for a contest on GaiaOnline, although, to satisfy all questioning minds, it is of my own creation and therefore not fanfiction. Gaia is forum website which has found no way to incorporate zombies into their mostly anime directed content. I got second place.. I haven't really proof read it as well as I *should*, but perhaps someday I'll go back through it and change the truly awkward sections. The story itself is about a man who wakes up to find himself in an unfamiliar environment with little knowledge as to how he arrived there.. Hell, I don't even know how that happened. Anyway, I can't tell you more, because that would ruin the surprise!! Pineapple Surprise!!!! Oh! And as a last warning (because my story was once rejected for this as well) I have a few ABBA lyrics near the tale's end.. They're stolen from 'Dancing Queen,' and I in no way claim to have written them.
This comes from a much longer and boring/annoying/cliche story of mine.. If you feel like torturing yourself with the rest go ahead and ask.. Anyway, this comes from basically my own version of vampires, before I knew anything about White Wolf.. Those of you that know it, don't eat me alive. .:glare at Austen.:. Moving on, Aria is a head vampire, owner of the mansion which serves as this scene's setting. Zane is a minion of hers.