William Lowe

I will often be thought of as mean spirited in my criticism, but I asure everyone that it is only my tendancy to be blunt, and maybe lack tact.  I will never simply write negative comments about anything without specific input.  I will also try to always say something positive as well. I hope others will do the same if I start posting things.

Severed Shadows Part 14 (Conclusion)

We made it!  The final installment of Severed Shadows!And just in case you are sad to see it all ending, this one leaves it wide open to "Continue".  :D

Severed Shadows Part 12

You guessed it!  Severed Shadows Continues...

Severed Shadows Part 13

Hang in there, just one more left!

Severed Shadows Part 8

Severed Shadows Continues...

Severed Shadows Part 9

Severed Shadows, seriously its still going...

Severed Shadows Part 7

Severed Shadows Continues...

Severed Shadows Part 10

Severed Shadows Continues...

Severed Shadows Part 11

Severed Shadows Continues...

Severed Shadows Part 5

Severed Shadows Continues...

Severed Shadows Part 3

Severed Shadows Continues...

Severed Shadows Part 6

Severed Shadows Continues some more...

Severed Shadows Part 2

Severed Shadows Continues...

Severed Shadows Part 4

Severed Shadows Continues...

Severed Shadows Part 1

A generally well meaning young man bound to an item of incredible necromantic power gets into trouble with some gnolls and things spiral out of control. With his acerbic and abrasive zombie sidekick, a runaway shadow and a crush on a girl who just might cleave his skull in two, our dark and somewhat handsome rogue is in for a rough time. So is everyone around him.Hopefully this story has all the important parts: romance, danger, humor, a beginning, middle and cliffhanger ending that both gives closure and begs for a sequel. Anyone who takes the time to read all or part of this story should please, please give me feedback. Crush it, pick it apart, chew it up and spit it out if you want to. Or be nice and tell me what IS good about it. Either way, false praise does none of us any good, so if you comment or message me, be honest and blunt. Be downright mean if you feel you must, just use specifics.  "You Suck" isn't quite what I'm looking for.