My newest edition and my shortest I think. Its a werewolf story with a female protagonist who is also a cold hearted theif who thinks nothing of murder, what I want to do is see how much I can get the readers to like her even though she's so obviously bad. just a little experiment that I'm hoping I can do something with.
same story as before, tragedy / teen kinda thing, but now there are guys, oh no what shall we do?!? this part was written pretty recently actually so I like it. It's in these chapters that you first meet the villain of the piece (who is actually my second favorite character and I think will turn out pretty well) again, any and all comments are welcome, as are names
This is the third installation of my Elsiana book (yet again I'd like to know if anyone has any names, leave them on my comments and I will take them into consideration) and therefore the fifth and sixth chapters. The previous chapters weren't that good since they were written a little over a year ago versus these that are far more recent, so I thank you for bearing with me through the torture that was me setting the book up when I was twelve and experimenting. There's a little more romance and action now and I had some fun with emotions and different points of veiw. I would also like to address the fact that a few of my friends thought that these were diary entries and I'd just like to say that they aren't and I only include the date for the sake of not confusing anyone (or trying not to). Enjoy
These are the third and fourth chapters to my Elsiana book (which has no true name so far). I will be publishing my book two chapters at a time since each chapter is fairly short and I was told by a moderator that it would be a better idea than putting up all seven chapters at once. Since there was some confusion by a friend who read my book and I forgot to say it in the first Elsiana publishing, the word followed by two sets of numbers is the date (EX Pondera 18, 342) and just a word to the wise pay close attention to the dates because they help you understand the story line.
This is a story I've been trying to write for a long time and this is the latest and most promising in a long line of attempts that I've only posted for the sake of getting feedback and editing advice. I have around seven chapters writen already, all better than these first two. However, the story is a coming of age story of a teenage girl with an unusual background and the tragedy that leads her to abandon her perfect life.