I actually got this idea from a dream, in which I was sort of in the position of Noemi, except there was no betrayal going on. I added that to give it a plot. I know that this one may seem rather depressing at the end, but not all stories have happy endings.
I forget where I got the inspiration for this story, but I did have lots of fun making up the names of people, places, and things. What do all of you think?