This is the second draft of chapter two. Anyway, this is the true beginning of the actual story. I have the later sections of the plot worked out, so after I get these first few set-up chapters done in a presentable fashion, the rest should actually be up rather quickly.
WORK IN PROGRESS. Most of its how I want it, but parts of it aren't quite fleshed out yet (and parts of it are too wordy). This is still in the 'set up' stages of the story, and I'm hoping to very soon move into more forward moving sections of the plot, but I want to take my time and make each section as good as it can be before I get further occupied. All comments are welcome, and if you're constructive, criticize as deeply as you wish. I want to grow as a writer.
This is a poem I wrote on a road trip through New Mexico. Needless to say, it was a pretty reflective experience. Its about not being able to see what's best for us and for others.
This is the first chapter of a parable about a vagrant angel. Its meant to be somewhat sarcastic and critical (though that really doesn't show up in this section). Its meant to start with a serious tone and then shift to something a little more unique. This is a revised draft, but its still going through revisions as I see them necessary. Your comments are very much appreciated.