This is actually a poem I wrote, expressing my desire to sprout wings and fly. A desire I'm sure many other people have, or maybe it's just me, but anywhodillywho, here it is. Hope it's out there enough that no one get mad at me. ^_^;
Here it is! The random story that I began writing one rainy day when I was extremely bored! It's my 'epic fantasy/whatever tale', and it is rather random, I just wrote it, I haven't fine tuned it or anything, so a critique of constructive quality is greatly appreciated. Enjoy! Or not, just comment about it!
This is a story idea that one of my friends and me came up with. The idea's kinda cliche and done a lot, but I like it anyway. And a cliche is still good, if you can pull it off right. I don't know if I'll be able to help do that, but yeah. Anyway, it's basically about a Vampire, a female Vampire, so she calls herself a Vampiress. I looked at Vampires in a bit different light in this story; it being foremost an occupation, as well as a state of being. It was a CHOICE for someone down the line to become a Vampire, taking on the undead qualities, then their offspring obviously has no choice but to be Vampires. Anyway, it is the rather cliche Vamp/Slayer romance, but I hope to give the idea justice. This is basically the prolouge, defining who the main 'heroine' really is. I wrote it in first person, a point of view I usually don't write in, so I suppose this whole thing is an experiment. Well, I hope you like it. If not, leave whatever CONSTRUCTIVE critisim you wish. So, yeah. Enjoy.